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My Own Being

I don't feel pain, but my life isn't easy.
And yes I know I am my own best friend.
No one cares but I am so much stronger because I will fight until the end.
I need to escape from this true-false world...
This undamaged destiny
Can not get caught in this endless circle. This ring of stupidity.
Out with my own
Out to be free
One with my mind
Why cant you see??
I have no need to hear the things that they say, for, my life is for me to live in my own way.
Violate my mind and destroy my fellings,
but DO NOT tell me what to do.
I don't care because I'm on my own side I can see right through you.
Feed my brain with your so called standards. Who says that I am not living right??
I'll break away from your common fashion, then maybe you'll see through your blurry sight.



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Ashers101 said...
May 11, 2012 at 9:57 pm:
It's really deep. That's what makes a poem amazing.
 
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CountryGothic said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 11:14 am:
Very good, but you need to be a little more careful with typing the correct spelling, but other than that...great writing!
 
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helly said...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 7:17 pm:
it sound a lot like me
 
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hannahmichelle said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 7:22 pm:
I like your punctuation habits, as odd as that may sound.
your words are beautiful
 
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xXx-Ruby-xXx said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 4:21 am:
This is good. This is very good. Brilliant, is what I should say. Great work. You're poems are outstanding. 5/5
 
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dancer16 said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 4:52 pm:
I really liked it! Nice Job!
 
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.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 1:26 pm:
This is really awesome. I cant count how many attempts at poems about society's rules and regulations i have had and failed at. But this is a truly poetic way to put it out there. It's great how just the words of one infinitely talented person can make someone see a whole new light, a whole new side of things.
 
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roseann This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 6:55 am:
the best out of the best! =)
 
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carolines This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 9:01 pm:
this was absolutely enlightening!
my favorite part was the "true-false world".
it's a beautiful line!--you've done a great job!
 
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kay15D@rk@ng3l This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 2:42 am:
this is a really good piece. i can see exactly where you're coming from, the flow the rhyme...it's actually quite inspiring. love it!
 
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clumsy_one123 said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 6:30 pm:
this is my favorite piece you have done. i love the way it flows and i love the rhyme.
nice work :)
 
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marine6704This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 9:50 am:
if i could write like this it would be better, i express myself, but never this deep. i swear you should be famous
 
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janee820 said...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 12:27 pm:
i love it!!!!! i really understand where you coming from in this poem.
 
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malgal3 said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 12:41 pm:
Wow. this honestly left me speechless.
 
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ChildoftheSky said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 6:35 am:
A couple grammar mistakes, but otherwise a wonderful piece! I can totally understand what you mean by this.
 
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crazySquid said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 7:59 pm:
love it
i can completly empathize
 
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....<3LOVE....<3 said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 9:39 am:
You do have a very good writer thank you for possitivly commenting on my poem "Mystical Creature"!
 
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CaptainFabulous. said...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 6:59 pm:
UHmazing
u have true talent
im glad you can express your emotions
 
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the1&onlyme said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 4:12 pm:
This is beautiful. I love when put so much feeling into their work instead of it feeling so hollow.
Thanks for the comment on my work!
 
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ficklefiction This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 12:16 pm:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
 
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