My Own Being

October 20, 2009
By AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx


I don't feel pain, but my life isn't easy.
And yes I know I am my own best friend.
No one cares but I am so much stronger because I will fight until the end.
I need to escape from this true-false world...
This undamaged destiny
Can not get caught in this endless circle. This ring of stupidity.
Out with my own
Out to be free
One with my mind
Why cant you see??
I have no need to hear the things that they say, for, my life is for me to live in my own way.
Violate my mind and destroy my fellings,
but DO NOT tell me what to do.
I don't care because I'm on my own side I can see right through you.
Feed my brain with your so called standards. Who says that I am not living right??
I'll break away from your common fashion, then maybe you'll see through your blurry sight.



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on May. 11 2012 at 9:57 pm
Ashers101 DIAMOND, Lebanon, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
I don't want to be like everyone else, I want to be me. I won't walk with all of you on the ground because I can fly. -My own quote

It's really deep. That's what makes a poem amazing.

on Mar. 29 2010 at 11:14 am
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

Very good, but you need to be a little more careful with typing the correct spelling, but other than that...great writing!

helly BRONZE said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 7:17 pm
helly BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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it sound a lot like me

on Mar. 11 2010 at 7:22 pm
hannahmichelle PLATINUM, Lewisburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Passion doesn't look beyond the moment of its existence.

I like your punctuation habits, as odd as that may sound.

your words are beautiful

on Mar. 6 2010 at 4:21 am
xXx-Ruby-xXx SILVER, Houston, Texas
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This is good. This is very good. Brilliant, is what I should say. Great work. You're poems are outstanding. 5/5

on Mar. 3 2010 at 4:52 pm
dancer16 BRONZE, Auburn, New York
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I really liked it! Nice Job!

on Feb. 21 2010 at 1:26 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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This is really awesome. I cant count how many attempts at poems about society's rules and regulations i have had and failed at. But this is a truly poetic way to put it out there. It's great how just the words of one infinitely talented person can make someone see a whole new light, a whole new side of things.

on Feb. 19 2010 at 6:55 am
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

the best out of the best! =)

on Feb. 17 2010 at 9:01 pm
carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
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this was absolutely enlightening!

my favorite part was the "true-false world".

it's a beautiful line!--you've done a great job!

kay.marie said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 2:42 am
kay.marie, Towaoc, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
*"Keep your head up and reach for the stars don't let no one get you down, you know who you are."-Mr.Capone-E*

*The obstacles we face in life aren't what make hard, it's how you choose to look at and deal with them.*

this is a really good piece. i can see exactly where you're coming from, the flow the rhyme...it's actually quite inspiring. love it!

on Feb. 10 2010 at 6:30 pm
clumsy_one123 SILVER, Brentwood, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"All daring starts from within." -Eudora Welty

this is my favorite piece you have done. i love the way it flows and i love the rhyme.

nice work :)

on Feb. 10 2010 at 9:50 am
marine6704 SILVER, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"/Friends are not just a relationship, or a book unwritten. its a BOND OVER TIME" Elisabeth Shinault

if i could write like this it would be better, i express myself, but never this deep. i swear you should be famous

on Feb. 9 2010 at 12:27 pm
MhszNaeBadd BRONZE, Buffalo, New York
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i love it!!!!! i really understand where you coming from in this poem.

malgal3 SILVER said...
on Feb. 8 2010 at 12:41 pm
malgal3 SILVER, Uhrichsville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I shall not condemn you for what you did wrong yesterday, if only you do it right today"
"If you learn from your mistakes, won't you just keep making them?"

Wow. this honestly left me speechless.

on Feb. 8 2010 at 6:35 am
ChildoftheSky SILVER, Hartford, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I am not a number; I am a free man!"-some movie or another. (Someday I'll remember it..."

A couple grammar mistakes, but otherwise a wonderful piece! I can totally understand what you mean by this.

crazySquid said...
on Feb. 5 2010 at 7:59 pm
love it

i can completly empathize

on Feb. 5 2010 at 9:39 am
PeanutButta BRONZE, Glen, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Friends are the only ones you have, If you lose them you have no one.....

You do have a very good writer thank you for possitivly commenting on my poem "Mystical Creature"!

on Feb. 3 2010 at 6:59 pm
CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
PERSONAL FAVORITE QUOTE::::

"When life hands you lemons,make BEEF STEW!"
-Andy Milanokis?(sp)

UHmazing

u have true talent

im glad you can express your emotions

on Feb. 1 2010 at 4:12 pm
the1&onlyme BRONZE, Odenville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
I like talking to a brick wall, it's the only thing in the world that never contradicts me.-Oscar Wilde

This is beautiful. I love when put so much feeling into their work instead of it feeling so hollow.

Thanks for the comment on my work!

on Jan. 21 2010 at 12:16 pm
ficklefiction SILVER, Elgin, South Carolina
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]


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