I control the game

October 20, 2009
By himynamesryanwhatsyours? SILVER, Christiana, Pennsylvania
himynamesryanwhatsyours? SILVER, Christiana, Pennsylvania
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Ice hockey
Slap shot, Snap shot, Wrist shot
Goal, Rebound, Assist
Shot, Block, great play
Save, Stop, Shot on goal
Hat trick, goal of the game, what a shot
The ice crushing under my skates
The sound of the puck being smacked by my stick
The sound of the goal siren
The crowd cheering
My music getting me pumped
I feel nervous, like im going to be destroyed
But when I step on the ice, it’s like a whole other world
And im the King of my own domain
Nothing can stop me
I am an unstoppable force to be reckoned with


The author's comments:
this is how i feel during my games...

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on Dec. 10 2009 at 8:52 am
himynamesryanwhatsyours? SILVER, Christiana, Pennsylvania
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this is excellent i think you have real talent that teacher you have should give you all a's


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