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The Rain MAG

October 19, 2009
By Emma SILVER, Speedway, Indiana
Emma SILVER, Speedway, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
:rolleyes: raconteur


The rain fell
from the smoky
clouds and pattered
on the roof of our
heads like bird seed

thrown at a wedding

It pooled and
flooded down
the gutters of
hair flowing
in rushing queues

down our foreheads

droplet

by

droplet

Sauntering along
dark eyebrows
and clinging
for dear life
to the branches

of eyelashes

Kissing sweetly our
sunburned cheeks
rolling mechanically
like freshly oiled
cogs off the

cliff of our noses

droplet

by

droplet

It seeped into the
crags of lobster
red lips resting
before their swift
suicidal drop on

our spongy chins

Falling in an
acrobatic grace
landing in a final
theatrical plop
liquid hula hoop

rings growing

droplet

by

droplet



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on Mar. 20 2014 at 4:59 am
So Do I.....  ;)

on May. 31 2010 at 12:06 pm
Hntrgrl15 SILVER, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
8 articles 3 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are two great days in a persons life, the day they are born, and the day they figure out why.

wow this has such amazing imagery. you can truly imagine everything

on May. 31 2010 at 7:37 am
Beautiful_Roses SILVER, Temple, Georgia
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is fragile so please don't throw anything at it.

i completly agree. you just see it slowly falling. this piece is amazing.

on May. 30 2010 at 4:07 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

That was wonderful. The picture in my mind was in slow motion.

on May. 30 2010 at 2:54 pm
SecretSelf14 BRONZE, Bridgeport, Connecticut
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
My favorite personal quote is, I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel. - Maya Angelou

- this felt like it was actually happening

on May. 30 2010 at 2:22 pm
thepaperinventory PLATINUM, Saratoga, California
22 articles 0 photos 8 comments
This is a beautiful poem. I love the rain :)

on May. 30 2010 at 10:05 am
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
27 articles 8 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

I love the part with the dark eyelashes... I thought it felt so impowering and so strong.

Very well written :)


on May. 28 2010 at 5:43 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"

Beautiful. Very creative. I love rain! :)

Check out some of my work if you can.