Unexpected Hurt

October 19, 2009
By Lady_Savage GOLD, Schenectady, New York
Lady_Savage GOLD, Schenectady, New York
15 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live life today because yesterday is gone and tomorrow may never come."


Im confused, idk what to do.
Even after all the things i said to you.
I thought you understood what you meant to me.
Then i read the i.ms like this cant be.
My heart dropped, i lost my breath.
Pressure building on my chest.
Damn i cant believe you, i seen it say i love you boo.
Thats what you say to me & thats what you said to her.
You lied about us, we.
I thought you couldnt hurt.
But you stabbed me with a knife, shot me with a gun.
I knew something wasnt right, i knew s*** happened at night, now i wanna be done.
Yo i really thought you was the one.
All THAT STUFF YOU SAID TO ME SON!
Tears immediatly fallin down my face,
sittin in his car, get me out this place.
Race out this pain and please dont chase.
I wanna be with you and i was planning to stay
but you wanna play and lie straight in my eyes day after day.
I cant believe you talking to your ex
i saw all the stuff you said on text.
You tried to hide it, if i assumed you denied it.
Now that i saw it on your kick
you wanna cry and say f*** this s***.
So now im crying still tryna figure out why and you skip the most important question.
You really gonna have me stressin.
Idk what to believe or what to do im so confused.
I keep shaking my head
everything i wanted to know you said to your ex.
And on aim, your a lame.
A fake,
i told you from the beginning
before we relate,
to think about what you really want
before you grab and take.


The author's comments:
True story. But things cleared up. =) Never give up, always try. But there comes a point when things arent getting better, when yu need to let go. Save the hurt and pain. Theres more to life and theres more in the world.

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Jazzzy517 GOLD said...
on May. 6 2010 at 11:42 am
Jazzzy517 GOLD, Meriden, Connecticut
17 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.

thanks! that would b awsome!

MikaylaC said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 2:42 pm
MikaylaC, St. Louis, Missouri
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Love looks not with the eyes, but with the heart.

Thats really strong poetry! its awsome!

on Oct. 27 2009 at 1:43 pm
MayaChristine GOLD, Stocksfield, Other
11 articles 0 photos 28 comments
wow, totally awesome. I found that if you read it like a rap, it felt more emotional. really awesome, I would like to read more by you =)

on Oct. 27 2009 at 1:09 pm
Lil_Soldier BRONZE, Madera, California
4 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You cant keep a good man down"

everyone pretty much said it..u did awesome on this piece.

keep up tha good work..i'd love to read more by u =]

Brndi said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 12:22 pm
OMG i absolutelty love this!! i can feel the emotion in the poem... its absolutely amazing!!! keep writing!!!

on Oct. 27 2009 at 10:40 am
Lady_Savage GOLD, Schenectady, New York
15 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live life today because yesterday is gone and tomorrow may never come."

THANKS FOR THE COMMENT ! =))

on Oct. 27 2009 at 10:39 am
Lady_Savage GOLD, Schenectady, New York
15 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live life today because yesterday is gone and tomorrow may never come."

THANKS FOR THE COMMENT !! =)))

I read yur work too and its freaakkin GREATTT !! OMGG =D i would lovee to read more and hopefully write something together =)

Jazzzy517 GOLD said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 7:34 am
Jazzzy517 GOLD, Meriden, Connecticut
17 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.

i absolutely LOVE it!!!! great work

on Oct. 26 2009 at 10:31 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
20 articles 0 photos 210 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

this is really good great job!


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