Alone In The Holocaust

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And it was so deep;
So cold, so alone.
Ragged, lifeless,
Deprived…
Deprived of his life,
Family, friends, and home.

It was just sickenning ,
So inhumane.
It was so awful, so dark.
Eyes filled with awful scenes,
Marches on for miles it seemed.
Starving and striving, far, far, far…
He was just a person, looked down upon for;
All the wrong reasons.
Kicked to the curb;
All alone in this crooked place.
He was so strong, yet so brittle…
The ground on which he stood seemed;
Red washed from its’ ocassional color.
Looking for a simple friend,
Maybe some food, but was given…
Nothing at all.

Later he found himself in this white filled room;
It stinched of death,
Was pale and scary.
He sat there bare, and waited.
Later there; this room filled steam,
He layed there deprived,dead, and hopeless…
In the steps…
Of several others.
And it was so deep, so cold,
So alone…





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Jynxx said...
May 11, 2010 at 5:22 pm

this was a good poem. the words clumped together and created a scene in my mind.

nice job! keep it up! =]

 
chetahgirl20 said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 11:55 am
Amazing. Just wonderful.
 
ColeN.Kuznia said...
Oct. 27, 2009 at 11:12 am
-Please leave feedback- it's greatly appreciated and would mean alot to me. Thank you-Cole Kuznia
 
more_weight This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 27, 2009 at 8:43 am
You just sent chills running through me. It is so haunting.
 
ColeN.Kuznia replied...
Oct. 27, 2009 at 10:13 am
well I do hope that it got it's message out =] thanks for the feedback
 
Hannahbear replied...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 7:32 pm
this is so friggin good! it made me feel for him, i love it when a writer can do that, make the reader really engage in what is going on..really care, ya know?
 
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