Alone In The Holocaust

October 19, 2009
By ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
15 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be one's self, is to be truly honest, truly loyal, and truly great."


And it was so deep;
So cold, so alone.
Ragged, lifeless,
Deprived…
Deprived of his life,
Family, friends, and home.

It was just sickenning ,
So inhumane.
It was so awful, so dark.
Eyes filled with awful scenes,
Marches on for miles it seemed.
Starving and striving, far, far, far…
He was just a person, looked down upon for;
All the wrong reasons.
Kicked to the curb;
All alone in this crooked place.
He was so strong, yet so brittle…
The ground on which he stood seemed;
Red washed from its’ ocassional color.
Looking for a simple friend,
Maybe some food, but was given…
Nothing at all.

Later he found himself in this white filled room;
It stinched of death,
Was pale and scary.
He sat there bare, and waited.
Later there; this room filled steam,
He layed there deprived,dead, and hopeless…
In the steps…
Of several others.
And it was so deep, so cold,
So alone…



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on May. 11 2010 at 5:22 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

this was a good poem. the words clumped together and created a scene in my mind.

nice job! keep it up! =]


on Nov. 24 2009 at 11:55 am
chetahgirl20 PLATINUM, Rosemount, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
The world is your oyster, and the universe is a fish.
-Me

Amazing. Just wonderful.

on Oct. 29 2009 at 7:32 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

this is so friggin good! it made me feel for him, i love it when a writer can do that, make the reader really engage in what is going on..really care, ya know?

ccxisleet GOLD said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 11:12 am
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
15 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be one's self, is to be truly honest, truly loyal, and truly great."

-Please leave feedback- it's greatly appreciated and would mean alot to me. Thank you-Cole Kuznia

ccxisleet GOLD said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 10:13 am
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
15 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be one's self, is to be truly honest, truly loyal, and truly great."

well I do hope that it got it's message out =] thanks for the feedback

on Oct. 27 2009 at 8:43 am
more_weight PLATINUM, Danville, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Tread softly, for you thread on my dreams.

You just sent chills running through me. It is so haunting.


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