I didn't love him anyway

October 18, 2009
By Fight4Love SILVER, Scott Depot, West Virginia
Fight4Love SILVER, Scott Depot, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is crazy and sometimes you hate it, but it isn't what other people think, it's what you do to make them think that." -One of my friends


The sun warms my skin
As I watch him. I smiled
At him through my weary
Eyes. I never could tell if
A person could love me. So
I starred at him taking a chance.
I mustarded up some strength
And called up some hope and
Went to him. I told him I liked
But he just laughed. I didn’t
Cry when he walked away.
I stood still and screamed
In my head. I sat down against
The tree’s trunk and thought,
“I didn’t love him anyway.”


The author's comments:
I'm not that great at poetry, but here's a little one.

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on Nov. 30 2009 at 8:48 pm
I can relate. This is nice. Please comment and rate on some of my stuff as well. Particularly "Just a Guy". Thanks :)

on Nov. 21 2009 at 9:26 pm
Fight4Love SILVER, Scott Depot, West Virginia
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is crazy and sometimes you hate it, but it isn't what other people think, it's what you do to make them think that." -One of my friends

thanks please comment on my story 'Maybe' thanks!!!!

vampluv11 GOLD said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 10:35 am
vampluv11 GOLD, Saugerties, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Go ask Alice.

Im thinking alot of people can relate to this poem :) excellent


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