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The Man I Need Him To Be

October 14, 2009
By Dana6 PLATINUM, Ashburn, Virginia
Dana6 PLATINUM, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let anyone look down on you because you are young, but set an example for the believers in speech, in life, in love, in faith and in purity. 1 Timothy 4:12


I try to make it work
But I just don’t understand
Why he can just step up and be a man
He says he’s got issues
That he’s trying to be better
But all I know is that my tears are getting wetter
I’m supposed to be sympathetic
For the demons he has to fight
But I’m the one crying alone at night
He leans on everyone
Pushing until they break
I stand on my own controlling my own fate
His life’s been hard
That’s what I’m told
But I felt that same pain when I was nine years old
From the same situation
We’ve taken different perspectives
It pushed our lives in such different directions
His soul fell
As mine began to shine
What’s wrong with him if I’m doing fine
Why is he so messed up
When the only thing wrong with me
Is him not being the man I need him to be


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Dana6 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 4:00 pm
Dana6 PLATINUM, Ashburn, Virginia
29 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Don't let anyone look down on you because you are young, but set an example for the believers in speech, in life, in love, in faith and in purity. 1 Timothy 4:12

thats exactly what mine is about my dad died almost six years ago and my brother is still depressed but i rose up and am doing really well. Im glad to know my poem meant something to you

Dana6

on Oct. 26 2009 at 9:41 pm
palabrasyalma, North Las Vegas, Nevada
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I don't know what this is supposed to be about. It may be about someone you care about deeply or someone you may even be in love with. All I know is that when I read this, it reminds me of how my brother and I coped differently with a tragedy in our lives. He let himself fall and I worked to make myself shine. This is brilliant and it hit my soul.

on Oct. 26 2009 at 7:54 pm
shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
72 articles 3 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can sum up everything I've learned about life in three words; it goes on." -Robert Frost

absolutely amazing(: read some of mineeeeeeeee

on Oct. 26 2009 at 2:45 pm
Skinnyjeankidd BRONZE, St.louis, Missouri
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
WELL I HAVNT BEEN ON HERE VERY LONG SO I DONT HAVE ONE YET BUT ILL CHOOSE EVENAULLY

ot takes one week

on Oct. 26 2009 at 12:51 pm
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
15 articles 0 photos 119 comments
very good!!

kepp writing loved it!!

on Oct. 26 2009 at 11:39 am
MRS.ROCHE SILVER, Panama City, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
NEVER LEAVE THE ONE YOU LOVE FOR THE ONE YOU LUST BECAUSE THE OE YOU LUST WILL LEAVE YOU FOR THE ONE THEY LOVE

hw lng do it take 4 them 2 email u about ur poem

on Oct. 26 2009 at 9:55 am
unknownheart GOLD, Memphis, Tennessee
10 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
LIFE IS LIKE A COIN YOU CAN ONLY SPEND IT ONCE SO MAKE WISE CHOICES....

this is how i feel so i really love ths one!

on Oct. 26 2009 at 8:15 am
NASHAYLA:) GOLD, Springfield, Ohio
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I love this one:)

one of us said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 8:05 am
great job! this rocked :) also, i agree with himu131195, nice flow.

on Oct. 26 2009 at 5:54 am
Sixteen PLATINUM, Jaipur, Other
20 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its not denial. I'm just very selective about the reality I accept. - Calvin

this is really gud.......!!!!!!!!

i loved how it flowed..:)