EL-OH-VEE-EE

October 14, 2009
By LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.


There are dead
Flowers on the table.
Every petal brown with age
And lack of water.
Ever petal filled with
The life of my misery.

There’s a burnt out
Light bulb on the desk.
Singed out from the light
That used to be over
My head lighting my
Ideas. To write this
Poem.

There are orange leaves
On the ground. With
Your footsteps on them.
And I pick one up. And
Sketch it in my brain. For
When I need you the most.

There’s a broken
Pencil on the floor of
The classroom where you
And I first saw who we really
Were. And decided we really
Liked each other. And you
Never picked it up. Because I
Never told you to.

There’s a broken
Heart in my chest. And
I know you can heal it.
He never could
Because he is nothing like
You.


The author's comments:
umm.. well this is about someone.....

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on Dec. 15 2011 at 9:53 pm
zadiekatie23 PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
39 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." - Dr. Seuss

I like how it leads up to the importance of the certain someone, and I like how your mind travels over all of the things to remind you of that person. Thanks!

on Oct. 26 2009 at 6:16 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

:) thank you inkspired!

on Oct. 26 2009 at 6:16 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

i've never had a fan.... hmm... lol jkjk. thank you kissingdawn331!

on Oct. 26 2009 at 3:15 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is really deep! I love it, how you use the objects to describe your emotions! Great job!

on Oct. 26 2009 at 10:33 am
kissingdawn331 SILVER, Palatine, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when your hourglass runs out of sand you can't flip it over and start again."(changes weekly so check next weeks l8er)

wow i totally understand..im a fan of your work...you're AMAZING


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