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You're my sparkling diamond (no, not like Moulin Rouge because she died)
But still, you're that rare "gleam of sunshine" in my life
You're that first shining star in the sky that everyone yearns to make a wish on
Or better yet, that rare shooting star that streaks across the night sky in all its vibrant colors-
that one star everyone wants to see in their life time
You're that "feeling infinite" feeling I get as I speed down the highway, windows rolled down, wind in my hair, and a mixed CD of favorite songs blasting in my ear
Speaking of which, all the songs on that CD remind me of you and try to express the way you make me feel
You're the care-free, blissful feeling I get by the water, the waves brushing against my toes and refreshing breeze across my face

You're the cause of all the butterflies (:




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found_my_dream(: This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 26, 2009 at 8:10 pm:
I LOVE THIS!!!!! :D check out my stuff too
 
xLyss replied...
Oct. 26, 2009 at 8:42 pm :
Thank you (: And I'll be sure to look at your stuff, too.
 
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Inkspired said...
Oct. 26, 2009 at 3:20 pm:
This is cute, and again, you described that feeling so well. It's like the person's talking to you. Great job!
 
xLyss replied...
Oct. 26, 2009 at 8:42 pm :
Thanks! I really appreciate your feedback (:
 
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