My True Colors

October 14, 2009
By Narice BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
Narice BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is what you get. This is who I am.
Take me now or leave me
Any way you can.
Sometimes I trip and fall
But I know where I stand.
And if you're thinking about changing my direction,
Don't mess with imperfection.
--Saving Jane


My Life Is Crumbling Down By A Self Destruct Wrecking Ball.
They're Trying To Get You To See My Colors. But They Are Not Telling You That They Have Inverted Those Colors Of Mine. Trying To Make Me Look As What I Am Not. I Wish That You Will See Past My Outer Shell Of Rumors, And See Who I Am. And Not What I Am Said To Be.
For A Young Woman, Who Looks So Strong, I Am Just A Little Girl Who Is Scarred For Eternity.
Im Scared, I Want To Leave Emotionally But Stay Physically, But Like I Said Once Before,This Is Impoosible To Do. For I Know That A Body Without A Soul Is Nothing, And A Soul Without A Body Is An Unexpressed Idea That Needs To Be Heard.
Can Anyone Save Me?



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on Oct. 25 2009 at 3:33 pm
Louis Satoshi Raymond Kori, Chuo-ku, Tokyo, Other
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wowowowowoww. I totally agree with this!

Narice BRONZE said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 10:21 am
Narice BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is what you get. This is who I am.
Take me now or leave me
Any way you can.
Sometimes I trip and fall
But I know where I stand.
And if you're thinking about changing my direction,
Don't mess with imperfection.
--Saving Jane

Heyy, Thank You So Much For The Confidence. :) Im Working On A New Piece, Just Barely Have Time To Write It Because I've Been Busy. But I'll Let You Know! Thanks Again :)

on Oct. 24 2009 at 2:16 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

I can 100% agree with this, this is excactly how I feel. Wow. WOW wow wow. Keep on writing girl, you go some serious talent. <3

on Oct. 24 2009 at 12:23 pm
MeganAnne PLATINUM, Niskayuna, New York
24 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
All my life I've looked at words as if I were seeing them for the first time. ~Ernest Hemingway

Wow. I just had to reread this a few times before I could even think of what to put here. Beautiful.

erikae GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 10:53 am
erikae GOLD, Brookfield, Wisconsin
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This is beautiful. I can relate to the message so well. Great job!

on Oct. 23 2009 at 10:44 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
35 articles 0 photos 82 comments
wow, you seriously just like made my day. i can relate to this so well! story of my life, babe.

on Oct. 23 2009 at 4:33 pm
TechieForLife GOLD, West St. Paul, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Live each day like it is the day you will be remembered.

*claps slowly*

Schubster said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 3:53 pm
Short, sweet, powerful, and to the point. Wonderful job :) *claps* luv ur selection of pic. btw

on Oct. 23 2009 at 2:56 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is so cool! I love it! It's so original, and the format's awesome, and so is the message. Great job!

Jazzzy517 GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 9:00 am
Jazzzy517 GOLD, Meriden, Connecticut
17 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.

omg.... ik EXACTLY how that feels... n i hate it! but the work is awsome


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