Sister

October 18, 2009
By wafflesmego1 PLATINUM, Gladstone, Missouri
wafflesmego1 PLATINUM, Gladstone, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Were gonna get through this together kiddo" - My grandpa


A sister is someone who is always there
she will be the one to love and care
she takes your heart and holds on tight
and releases it when you find love at first sight
she sticks by your side rather decision bad or good
shes the only one who understood
shes with you through the long hard years
even when you have cried oh so many tears
she is the one to thank
for what your life has to make
to her there is only one thing to say
but it must be done in a very special way
when sister is said
she never questions who
she just looks smiles and says
"I will always love you!"



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on Oct. 24 2009 at 2:19 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

I love this poem! I have a little sister and these really reminds me of what kind of sister I should be. Thank you so much for putting this on the site, you are a very tremendous author, never stop writing.

on Oct. 24 2009 at 10:01 am
shakedra<3 SILVER, Carrollton, Texas
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oh my gosh yhat was soooooo BEAUTIFUL,i really did like it...i bet u r a really good sis.

on Oct. 23 2009 at 11:37 am
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
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I really like this poem, because I have a sister and we are really close. I think she will like your piece just as I do. nice job!!!

on Oct. 23 2009 at 11:17 am
I really like your poem. Simple and not complicated, yet very sweet and influecial.

Fryeem said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 3:03 pm
Your poem was outstanding! I do not have a sister though and I never really wanted one until I read this piece. I had never realized so many great things there were about a sister. I loved the first two lines, " A sister is someone who is always there she will be the one to love and share". These two lines were so powerful to me and made me want to read on. I also loved the smooth fluency it had to it. I did not understand what you meant when you stated "when sister is said she never questions who she just smiles and says I will always love you!". I was unsure of who would be saying sister and why, were they thanking her? However, this is truly the best piece I had ever read on TeenInk, you should write more poems. Keep up the great work!

on Oct. 21 2009 at 10:14 pm
The_Erstwhile_Pedestrian SILVER, Shelbyville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Why do we fall, Master Bruce? So that we can learn to pick ourselves up."

Sweet poem -- very true!


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