Just a Boy

October 17, 2009
By tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
15 articles 3 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt


DJ promised forever,
Forever was a game.
His heartbreak character
Will only get him fame.

He's good with his words,
He knows what to say.
DJ will convince you
To give your heart away.

DJ's a gentleman.
Roses, he'll buy,
But after awhile
You'll just want to cry.

"I love you" is just a line
He didn't know it'd offend.
Did anyone tell him
This is how it would end?

Don't believe his excuses
They're all just a lie
In time, you'll see
he'll only say "Good-bye."

He'll break your heart,
Crush it in two.
And the most pain you'll cause him
Is a stomp on his shoe.

He's not worth your time
To him, you're just a toy
But maybe you'll see
He is just a boy.



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on Apr. 13 2010 at 9:43 pm
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
15 articles 3 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

haha this is actually one of my favorite poems that i've written so far :)

on Apr. 13 2010 at 10:16 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

awesome!! i just love your work :) this is another great piece. when i'm in the middle of a heartbreak i'll have to remember "he is just a boy!" :D love it :)

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on Mar. 24 2010 at 4:15 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
0 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You live but once, you might as well be amusing." -Coco Chanel
"Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you're alive, it isn't." -Richard Bach
"Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love." -Einstein

wow. that was really amazing.

on Jan. 13 2010 at 8:51 pm
KassidyAnn SILVER, Manhattan, Kansas
9 articles 5 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Promise me you'll always remember: You're braver than you believe, and stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think."- Christopher Robin to Pooh

This is really really good. I like it alot. Keep it up!

on Oct. 25 2009 at 9:32 am
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
15 articles 3 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

thank you very much :)

on Oct. 25 2009 at 9:32 am
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
15 articles 3 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

awe thank youu :) that means a lot

on Oct. 25 2009 at 9:31 am
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
15 articles 3 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

awe thanks :)

Kass_ BRONZE said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 10:27 pm
Kass_ BRONZE, Uvalde, Texas
1 article 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Promise me you'll always remember: You're braver than you believe, and stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think."-A.A. Milne

Omg girl. This stuff is completely amazing!

on Oct. 24 2009 at 8:07 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
20 articles 0 photos 210 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

wow i wish i could write like this! i love this poem it makes me really happy acutally. nice job keep writing!!!

on Oct. 24 2009 at 6:26 pm
i-am-nicole-ashley GOLD, Hutchinson, Minnesota
17 articles 9 photos 8 comments
Great poem! very well writen! keep it up!

on Oct. 24 2009 at 9:07 am
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
15 articles 3 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

yeah i wrote it! lol i really like it :)

on Oct. 24 2009 at 9:06 am
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
15 articles 3 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

awe thanks! I really liked that one too! but yeah i wrote it :)

PoohBear said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 8:22 pm
Oh pressure is pretty cool i didnt know u wrote it!!!!!

on Oct. 23 2009 at 7:56 pm
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
15 articles 3 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

awwe thanks, that means a lot :) if you click on more by this author you can see my other two poems, they are called Pressure and As Time Goes By. If you can't find the More by this author link i'll send you a link if you'd like :)

PoohBear said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 7:48 pm
I love ur poem wat other poems do u have online?

on Oct. 23 2009 at 7:34 pm
Westie_candies2012 BRONZE, Metamora, Michigan
3 articles 2 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what your gonna get." Forest gump

Ya alot of guys are like this.

on Oct. 23 2009 at 7:09 pm
beccabeth96 BRONZE, Cedar Grove, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's not about waiting for the storm to pass it's about learning to dance in the rain"

that is so true. so amazinng!

on Oct. 23 2009 at 1:36 pm
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
15 articles 3 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

thank you very much! :)

on Oct. 23 2009 at 1:35 pm
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
15 articles 3 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

lol it's just a random picture but thanks :)

on Oct. 23 2009 at 12:49 pm
xxjosiexx143 SILVER, Lexington Twp., Maine
9 articles 6 photos 23 comments
Aww, this is a good poem... keep t up =)


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