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She spoke slowly,
her words stumbling from her lips.
The words
he couldn't understand
didn't want to understand.
She averted his eyes,
confirming her meaning.
he was lost
dizzy
sick
suffocating.
Immeasurable hurt
flooded his senses.
as she walked away awkwardly,
he stood drowning
dying
without her he was nothing.




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HOT-P!NK said...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 3:49 pm:
wow.. this is deep, i love the way u can imagine it tho, cause its very true!! ur a good writer, keep writig...comment mine!!
 
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