You And Me, Forever!

October 12, 2009
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You and me, forever
I thought it would last.
But instead of looking at the future,
You kept looking at the past.

You and me, forever
Me and you never got along.
You always put me down,
When you were suppose to make me strong!

You and me, forever
I thought that i loved you.
But, I guess I didn't really care.
You felt the same way too.

You and me, NEVER!!!
I guess it wasn't meant to be.
I tried to make this work.
You an just forget about me!

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tennisislovee34 said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 9:05 pm
I really like this! I rhyme my poems the same way, but good jobb! Keep it up!
love92 said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 5:26 pm
heaven said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 11:42 am
i just got dumped on 10-19-09
and this totally reminds me of me and
him i mean why are guys such fakes and liars!! that what i want to no then they dont know why they broke up with you
there just confused ha that what he sed to me.
Brndi replied...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 12:39 pm
yea guys are liars they just tell you things just to make you feel better and then they get rid of you when they get bored of you... hang in there.. there is someone out there that is right for you!! trust me i finally found the right one and it took me along time to figure out what i wanted... just hang in there and make him think it doesnt bother you!! :)
<3$~DarkAngel~$<3 said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 11:40 am
reminds me of my ex its soooo true i loved it!!!
Maigz said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 2:00 am
Really like it. Poetry seems so hard to write unless im in the right mood!
Jakala J. said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 1:36 pm
omg this was so pretty..
jakala roche
justjessie said...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 11:30 pm
i love how simple this is, true and to the point. great job!!!
blingblang4eva said...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 6:57 pm
this is exactl how i feel bout my x :) well done
Hannahbear said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 5:57 pm
This describes so many peoples relationships, especially teens. unfortunatly i can relate to this and so can many others, i love it :)
Ar-panda said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 3:16 pm
I loved it! It was short, but really explained your feelings well! Good job!
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