You And Me, Forever!

October 12, 2009
By NASHAYLA:) GOLD, Springfield, Ohio
NASHAYLA:) GOLD, Springfield, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 3 comments

You and me, forever
I thought it would last.
But instead of looking at the future,
You kept looking at the past.

You and me, forever
Me and you never got along.
You always put me down,
When you were suppose to make me strong!

You and me, forever
I thought that i loved you.
But, I guess I didn't really care.
You felt the same way too.

You and me, NEVER!!!
I guess it wasn't meant to be.
I tried to make this work.
You an just forget about me!



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on Oct. 21 2009 at 9:05 pm
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

I really like this! I rhyme my poems the same way, but good jobb! Keep it up!

love92 said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 5:26 pm
OMG I LOVE THIS POEM ME AND MY EX SOUNDS JUST LIKE THE POE... I LOVE THIS POEM FOR REAL :-}

Brndi said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 12:39 pm
yea guys are liars they just tell you things just to make you feel better and then they get rid of you when they get bored of you... hang in there.. there is someone out there that is right for you!! trust me i finally found the right one and it took me along time to figure out what i wanted... just hang in there and make him think it doesnt bother you!! :)

on Oct. 20 2009 at 11:42 am
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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i just got dumped on 10-19-09

and this totally reminds me of me and

him i mean why are guys such fakes and liars!! that what i want to no then they dont know why they broke up with you

there just confused ha that what he sed to me.

on Oct. 20 2009 at 11:40 am
EternityBroken GOLD, Hooker, Oklahoma
17 articles 2 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is impossible to love and be wise.

reminds me of my ex its soooo true i loved it!!!

mai..... GOLD said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 2:00 am
mai..... GOLD, Deloraine, Other
13 articles 45 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just be yourself, because life's to short to be anybody else" :) - Step Up 2 The Streets :) ♥

Really like it. Poetry seems so hard to write unless im in the right mood!

on Oct. 19 2009 at 1:36 pm
MRS.ROCHE SILVER, Panama City, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
NEVER LEAVE THE ONE YOU LOVE FOR THE ONE YOU LUST BECAUSE THE OE YOU LUST WILL LEAVE YOU FOR THE ONE THEY LOVE

omg this was so pretty..

jakala roche

on Oct. 18 2009 at 11:30 pm
justjessie GOLD, Lakeland, Florida
18 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
if i cant be something to someone then i want to be nothing to everyone

i love how simple this is, true and to the point. great job!!!

on Oct. 18 2009 at 6:57 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
160 articles 0 photos 105 comments
this is exactl how i feel bout my x :) well done

on Oct. 17 2009 at 5:57 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

This describes so many peoples relationships, especially teens. unfortunatly i can relate to this and so can many others, i love it :)

on Oct. 17 2009 at 3:16 pm
pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
8 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
“For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.” -Audrey Hepburn

I loved it! It was short, but really explained your feelings well! Good job!


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