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A thousand miles,
A hundred feet,
Between you and me.

A thousand words,
A hundred moments,
And a silent plea.

Swirling and unfurling,
Emotions unfeeling,
Words lost in the distance,
Unreachable, unspeakable,

Always and forever.
These I must endeavor.




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Stephanie N. said...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 3:08 pm:
I really didn't like this at all.
 
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heaven said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 12:19 pm:
this is really good!!
keep writing i love it(:
 
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dancerpoet92 said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 7:52 pm:
i love this poem i have felt the same way many times... i could really connect and a lot of poets miss that connection. bravo for a job really well done
 
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~*TheDreamer*~ said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 6:16 pm:
Wow! I love this! It really gets across that distressed emotion and it is very beautifully said. Very nice :)
 
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justjessie said...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 11:31 pm:
love love love this. (:
 
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.:al3na:. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 7:16 pm:
AMAZING POEM! I think you have a very creative and brilliant use of rhymes and vocabulary.
 
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lgrs_88 said...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 5:21 pm:
I love this! It's really well written and conveys real emotion. I've totally been there. I wonder if you were talking about losing a friend or about a crush?
 
.:al3na:. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 7:17 pm :
i agree, you don't know exactly what or who the distressed person is talking about or where they are..you just get the imagery that there is an absence and a longing.
 
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