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October 12, 2009
By Hauntingreality BRONZE, Santa Fe, New Mexico
Hauntingreality BRONZE, Santa Fe, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"All we see or seem is but a dream with in a dream"Edgar Allan Poe
" 'Gotchic' is just a word recalling a multitude of sins!"Vincent Price
"One person's crazyness is another person's reality. "Tim Burton


I don't want to try no more
I'm sick of it
I'm becoming tired of trying
There's no point ………well as far as I can see
A big nothing standing in front of me

Just yelling, confusion, fighting
Filling me up
just halfway there
Tears, sadness, anger
Reaching the top
only a little more to go
Frustration, brokenness
oh wait to late I just hit the top!!

Keep going almost there
Your words are haunting me
But I really don't give a damn!!!!!
About your words it seems
To me all you care is playing the part for your self!
So I ask "my little actor" have you ever really noticed……….

Noticed my scares down my arm so close to the purple line?
Noticed…… my voice never filling the room?
Noticed my fake smiles?
Noticed…. My looks not wanting to go on?

I really don't think you can
See or noticed me
I hear that Most notice when there is Nothing there.
So tell me do you notice then or Now?


The author's comments:
Umm well this is sort a Poem I did back when I was having big issues with the Parents...so umm yeah not to sure if it's good...but thought of posting it

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on Oct. 20 2009 at 7:56 pm
Th3k!DWr!tE5 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Onward ever, backward never
- My dad

This is why I love poetry, it's honest, it's real, it's to the freakin point. Good job!!! Check out some of my work.

Brndi said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 12:47 pm
yea i can totally relate to this poem... my parents only listen to what they want to hear and block out everything else. i am a cutter and my dad saw that i cut my wrist and he just asked me what it was and i lied and he believed me... i just finally told my mom this morning that i cut myself... it was the hardest thing for me to do. but keep your head up things do get better... even if its after you move out:) but very good poem i love it!!! keep writing!

archon GOLD said...
on Oct. 19 2009 at 2:24 am
archon GOLD, Mandeville, Louisiana
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great, simple display of emotion

on Oct. 18 2009 at 11:35 pm
justjessie GOLD, Lakeland, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
if i cant be something to someone then i want to be nothing to everyone

there is alot of emotion in this. i love it. and ye all we can do in this life is try to make the best of even the worst situations. keep your head up.

on Oct. 18 2009 at 9:49 pm
Hauntingreality BRONZE, Santa Fe, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"All we see or seem is but a dream with in a dream"Edgar Allan Poe
" 'Gotchic' is just a word recalling a multitude of sins!"Vincent Price
"One person's crazyness is another person's reality. "Tim Burton

Thank you. Don't feel bad i mean what can u do but make the best of it no?

on Oct. 18 2009 at 8:57 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

Oh, this is so sad! You've really put emotion into it, and I feel so bad for you! It's really well written and totally touches the heart.


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