Line Two Zero

October 12, 2009
We banded together.
Before the music, before the moon and flesh,
line two, line zero. be-for-her,

you said.
Through night we terrorized.
City lights city fights
and city nights.

Days we all saw.
Crushing flaws and so on,
writing laws we go
on. And further.
Yet when I drew the last straw we had
stowed on,
you sailed away with her.
We drew lines from here to the sun.
pulled songs
ran seas. My cracked knees
were stunned when we last
swam. Still you erase,
line two zero began.

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archon said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 2:30 am
i really like the rythm of it
whats the significance of the lines though?
Christy_J said...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 6:30 pm
This is amazing!
Hawkberry This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 4:55 pm
It's beautiful. I can really feel the pain in every word. Keep writing
Faith C. replied...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 5:11 pm
thank you!!
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