October 11, 2009
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i hear the thunder its like bass drum clashes...
i feel the refreshing rain like mist hitting my face..
i see the wonderful colors of the lighting like little stars dancing around the sky in the dark..
i never want this to end these wonderful smells, feelings, and colors. but i know the minute i open my eyes this wonderful seen will disapear.

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ZAVERY said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 7:53 pm
I really like this poetry. So emotional and realistic. You seem to see all this is you just shut your eyes. Five stars *****! P.S Can you please read some of my work and comment? PLZ?
RaNdOm replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 1:33 pm
thank u ^_^ yea i will
ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 1:38 pm
Sorry, I wrote that comment, but my sister went on the computer and changed the comment a bit. You don't have to comment. Sorry 'bout that. By the way, I love the style of drawing you have in this!
ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 3:19 pm
Oh never mind. You didn't draw this. Lol! Sorry about that, too
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