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October 11, 2009
By RaNdOm PLATINUM, Davenport, Iowa
RaNdOm PLATINUM, Davenport, Iowa
28 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
love doesn't hurt. its the pain that comes after you love.


i hear the thunder its like bass drum clashes...
i feel the refreshing rain like mist hitting my face..
i see the wonderful colors of the lighting like little stars dancing around the sky in the dark..
i never want this to end these wonderful smells, feelings, and colors. but i know the minute i open my eyes this wonderful seen will disapear.



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_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 3:19 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Oh never mind. You didn't draw this. Lol! Sorry about that, too

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 1:38 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Sorry, I wrote that comment, but my sister went on the computer and changed the comment a bit. You don't have to comment. Sorry 'bout that. By the way, I love the style of drawing you have in this!

on Apr. 11 2010 at 1:33 pm
RaNdOm PLATINUM, Davenport, Iowa
28 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
love doesn't hurt. its the pain that comes after you love.

thank u ^_^ yea i will

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 7:53 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

I really like this poetry. So emotional and realistic. You seem to see all this is you just shut your eyes. Five stars *****! P.S Can you please read some of my work and comment? PLZ?


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