who is that in the red stilettoes

October 11, 2009
By PennState2011 BRONZE, Enterprise, Alabama
PennState2011 BRONZE, Enterprise, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"make your life a mission not an intermission"
"follow your heart because that is the only thing you can trust."
"you are your only true friend :)"


That girl with those red heels,
She must be a model,
The way she struts herself in those red stilettos.
That girl walks like she owns Hollywood square,
Flashing lights, paparazzi calling her name,
I think she famous the way she acts in those red stilettos.
Blond hair sways from side to side while she walks into a coffee shop,
Her bag matches those red stilettos which means she has great taste,
Who is this person in those red heels known as stilettos?
People are asking how her sister is doing,
Who has a famous sister and struts herself in those red stilettos?
She turns around and puts up her sunglasses to reveal who she is,
Jamie Lynn Spears is the girl who struts herself in those stiletto heels.


The author's comments:
i had to write this for a poetry project and everybody fell in love with it because while i was reading it they all tryed to guess who it was :)

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on Nov. 3 2009 at 8:14 am
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"

i really like this alot! its by far one of the best iv read on here...pls check out my work and let me know wat u think

on Oct. 18 2009 at 2:42 pm
PennState2011 BRONZE, Enterprise, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"make your life a mission not an intermission"
"follow your heart because that is the only thing you can trust."
"you are your only true friend :)"

thanks for your comment it makes me feel good :)

on Oct. 17 2009 at 5:40 pm
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's mouth...it will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala

Pretty good. Nice surprise at the end. Very good use of repetition.


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