Wondering

October 10, 2009
By -Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous


Sitting in the dark thinking about her,
Wondering if she's thinking about me too.
Can't believe I'm insane enough to think this might actually work: Not willing to accept reality.
Deep down inside I know she'll be just like the others, but I still throw myself out there anyways;
Hoping that by some grace of God she'll be the one.


The author's comments:
This isn't one of my best writings, but I decided to put it on the website because I believe that almost everyone goes through these thoughts at some point and time,and I just hope people can relate to it.

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-Ash- SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 9:27 pm
-Ash- SILVER, Redmond, Washington
7 articles 4 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
She wants to die. She wants to disappear, to be remembered no more. She wants so terribly to be forgotten, all her mistakes, all her failures, everything. Her name to be wiped free from all record of existence. Because is it really existing when you’ve got nothing to show for your life?

i can tootttaalllyyyy relate :/ but i really liked it! 5 stars!!

on Sep. 17 2010 at 10:14 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

sad cute and perfect:) 5 starz

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Sep. 17 2010 at 9:50 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

Thank you!!!                 

on Aug. 7 2010 at 8:21 pm
I really really like this. Its amazing.

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 3:51 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

Sure Maddy, no problem. Thanks for reading!!!

on Jun. 2 2010 at 1:14 am
Chinadoll BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 172 comments

Wow! You just said in an artful way what everyone feels one time or another. That's amazing! You have talent! :)

Also could you look at my poem? It's called Dear Peers-Saddness. I would love your input :)


-Kal- GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 3:38 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

thanks Sarbear and Shelby!!! I really appreciate the comments!!! :)

on Apr. 26 2010 at 7:15 am
ofpaintedroses GOLD, Berne, Indiana
12 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
"How long is forever?"
"Sometimes just one second."

aw! i know exactly where you're coming from. this is sooo cute. kind of shows how many people really get what its like to always be searching so that you can sit and relax with the perfect person. :)

Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 24 2010 at 11:23 am
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

like i said b4, your writing is relatable. everyone can use your poems to know someone else feels like them

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 6:09 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

maybeme595: Thanks so much! I really appreciate the comment :)

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 6:08 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

LostAngel: Again, thanks! And sure, I would be happy to look at your work :)

on Apr. 17 2010 at 10:00 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
65 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"

Again with a great piece of work. I would love it if you commented on some of my work :)

on Mar. 11 2010 at 4:41 pm
maybeme595 SILVER, Woodbury, Connecticut
5 articles 3 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's okay to be angry and never let go, it only gets harder, the more that you know. When you get lonely if no one's around, you know that I'll catch you when you're falling down. -Yellowcard

wow. this is really good. rly speaks to how so many people feel.

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 4:00 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

Thanks :)

I will be more than happy to look at your work, and I'm sure I'll enjoy it thoroughly.

on Mar. 9 2010 at 2:31 pm
BrittneyCloud SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
7 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dont tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon!"

I think you work is great. Mine doesnt compare but would you be willing to look at some of my work?

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 3:18 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

Haha, you're crazy writerscramp :) (That was teasing, I'm not being serious)

Anyways, thanks... Again... Lol :)

on Feb. 28 2010 at 8:25 pm
writerscramp01 GOLD, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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its writerscramp second more "professional" screen. lol and work EVERTHING is better!

on Feb. 28 2010 at 8:24 pm
writerscramp01 GOLD, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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i know i read this one already and already commented but i really like it!

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 10:51 am
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

Thanks guys. I really appreciate your comments :)

on Feb. 1 2010 at 7:08 pm
Michaela_Touch GOLD, Lake Charles, Louisiana
11 articles 22 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
God's got you on His potter's wheel. Jeremiah chapter 18.

Jatavion! You are the best teen poet I have ever heard! Your poems are beautiful. Keep writing and don't let anything stop you!


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