Wondering

October 10, 2009
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Sitting in the dark thinking about her,
Wondering if she's thinking about me too.
Can't believe I'm insane enough to think this might actually work: Not willing to accept reality.
Deep down inside I know she'll be just like the others, but I still throw myself out there anyways;
Hoping that by some grace of God she'll be the one.





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-Ash- said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 9:27 pm
i can tootttaalllyyyy relate :/ but i really liked it! 5 stars!!
 
Supernova7 said...
Sept. 17, 2010 at 10:14 pm
sad cute and perfect:) 5 starz
 
some1overtherainbow said...
Aug. 7, 2010 at 8:21 pm
I really really like this. Its amazing.
 
-Kal- replied...
Sept. 17, 2010 at 9:50 pm
Thank you!!!                 
 
Asianflowers said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 1:14 am

Wow! You just said in an artful way what everyone feels one time or another. That's amazing! You have talent! :)

Also could you look at my poem? It's called Dear Peers-Saddness. I would love your input :)

 
-Kal- replied...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 3:51 pm
Sure Maddy, no problem. Thanks for reading!!!
 
perceptive_soul said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 7:15 am
aw! i know exactly where you're coming from. this is sooo cute. kind of shows how many people really get what its like to always be searching so that you can sit and relax with the perfect person. :)
 
-Kal- replied...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 3:38 pm
thanks Sarbear and Shelby!!! I really appreciate the comments!!! :)
 
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 24, 2010 at 11:23 am
like i said b4, your writing is relatable. everyone can use your poems to know someone else feels like them
 
LostAngel said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 10:00 pm
Again with a great piece of work. I would love it if you commented on some of my work :)
 
maybeme595 said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 4:41 pm
wow. this is really good. rly speaks to how so many people feel.
 
-Kal- replied...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 6:08 pm
LostAngel: Again, thanks! And sure, I would be happy to look at your work :)
 
-Kal- replied...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 6:09 pm
maybeme595: Thanks so much! I really appreciate the comment :)
 
Bbrat said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 2:31 pm
I think you work is great. Mine doesnt compare but would you be willing to look at some of my work?
 
-Kal- replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 4:00 pm
Thanks :)
I will be more than happy to look at your work, and I'm sure I'll enjoy it thoroughly.
 
writerscramp01 said...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 8:24 pm
i know i read this one already and already commented but i really like it!
 
writerscramp01 replied...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 8:25 pm
its writerscramp second more "professional" screen. lol and work EVERTHING is better!
 
Jatavion replied...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 3:18 pm
Haha, you're crazy writerscramp :) (That was teasing, I'm not being serious)
Anyways, thanks... Again... Lol :)
 
**missybell** said...
Feb. 1, 2010 at 7:08 pm
Jatavion! You are the best teen poet I have ever heard! Your poems are beautiful. Keep writing and don't let anything stop you!
 
Jatavion replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 10:51 am
Thanks guys. I really appreciate your comments :)
 
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