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My Angel

October 9, 2009
By caramelz. BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
caramelz. BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
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The light from your eyes shinging like
God's Rays pushing through the clouds
My Angel; you never let me get down.

You keep me soaring in the air forever
through an Endless Diamond Sky
like we're in A Whole New World
My Angel; I'm so lucky to be your girl.

That's why I'm counting these stars like blessings,
matching them with reasons why I love you
My Angel; nothing will ever come above you.

I love you More Than My Own Life like
those starcrossed lovers from Twilight
My Angel; with you everything feels so right.

Your smooth touch sweet like chocolate
strawberries fresh with perspiration
My Angel; I'll explore your each and every foundation.

Your voice, soft and rough, textured like
the rich brown waves in your hair
My Angel; your halo is so obviously there.

My skies, gray, and clouded until you arrived,
sudden; it was as if you were the sun in my life
and that shine is how I know you're
My Angel; a guardian thats forever mine.

The author's comments:
This poem is about my boyfriend, Brandon. It's meant to be read aloud, but I wanted to get feedback. Please don't be harsh. I'm interested in what you think about it.

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on Oct. 23 2009 at 4:51 pm
I Love You / and This Poem lol