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my mistake

October 9, 2009
By Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
48 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
-you have many to learn but nothing to lose.
-the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else...
-good girls are bad girls that dont get caught.


I made a mistake
I know that I'm sorry
but the words just won't come out.

I don't want to embarrass myself, in front of everyone

I don't know what to do

I dream of 3 thousand eyes
turning into fierce, cold looks.

I wake up every morning,
my heart beating as fast as it can.

At school I wear a secret smile
covering my deep dark secret.

What can I do?
Time is just ticking away..

It's already too late



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on Mar. 29 2010 at 2:05 pm
AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Most people want to be the sun that brightens your day. I'd rather be the moon that shines down on you in your darkest hour.

so lovely put... something everyone can somehow relate to. job well done!

on Feb. 2 2010 at 6:33 pm
MsRocker SILVER, Blahblahblah, Other
5 articles 2 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
be strong now because things will get better it might be stormy now but it cant rain forver

wow this is a great poem, and trust me i know how you feel

on Jan. 28 2010 at 6:43 am
Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
48 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
-you have many to learn but nothing to lose.
-the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else...
-good girls are bad girls that dont get caught.

thanks for the comment! I'll work on that!

Oliviaw BRONZE said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 5:15 pm
Oliviaw BRONZE, West Cola, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Screwed down for life." ---Iowa Bob, The Hotel New Hampshire

I felt a since of mystery and true-feeling in this poem. You expressed your feelings very openly, and I liked that about the poem. Good job. One thing that you could work on is describing more. I read your short story about the librarian, and noticed this too. If you used more description, then your work would be a lot stronger.