once again

October 8, 2009
By relaxingcry GOLD, Buffalo, New York
relaxingcry GOLD, Buffalo, New York
10 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
i go hard forever thats just how im designed thats just how im built see the look in my eyes take all this from me and im still going to survive


as your eyes close,
and you slowly dose,
off to sleep,
your dream girl starts to weep,

in the absence of you,
not knowing what to do,
she starts to cut,
not to deep,

but vertically,
her veins split,
and her blanket is knit,
within the morgue,

you finally,
slip into fallacy,
the fake dream world,
but it seems so real,
without her,

now what should you do,
should you find her,
follow her,
its your only choice,

your choking,
on your voice,
and next thing you know,
your asleep at your funeral,

dreaming of her,
once again


The author's comments:
i miss her

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on Nov. 12 2009 at 10:35 am
relaxingcry GOLD, Buffalo, New York
10 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
i go hard forever thats just how im designed thats just how im built see the look in my eyes take all this from me and im still going to survive

thank you i guess i dont give my writin enough credit

on Oct. 22 2009 at 8:02 pm
elarebadaxe SILVER, Portage, Michigan
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OCCUPY MORDOR: because one ring shouldn't be allowed to rule them all.

LOVE it! You are very talented! (And no, I am not just saying that! I wouldn't say that unless it was true!)

on Oct. 19 2009 at 5:42 pm
elarebadaxe SILVER, Portage, Michigan
7 articles 1 photo 32 comments

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OCCUPY MORDOR: because one ring shouldn't be allowed to rule them all.

Wow! This is good! It is kind of mysterious and confusing, but that is what most poetry is suoopsed to be like, so great job!


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