once again

October 8, 2009
as your eyes close,
and you slowly dose,
off to sleep,
your dream girl starts to weep,

in the absence of you,
not knowing what to do,
she starts to cut,
not to deep,

but vertically,
her veins split,
and her blanket is knit,
within the morgue,

you finally,
slip into fallacy,
the fake dream world,
but it seems so real,
without her,

now what should you do,
should you find her,
follow her,
its your only choice,

your choking,
on your voice,
and next thing you know,
your asleep at your funeral,

dreaming of her,
once again

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elarebadaxe said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 8:02 pm
LOVE it! You are very talented! (And no, I am not just saying that! I wouldn't say that unless it was true!)
relaxingcry replied...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 10:35 am
thank you i guess i dont give my writin enough credit
ElAre<3 said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 5:42 pm
Wow! This is good! It is kind of mysterious and confusing, but that is what most poetry is suoopsed to be like, so great job!
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