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Cannot See
October 8, 2009
Heartbreaking pain
may try to reign
my life,
my mind,
my soul.
"My kingdom numb
my will is done
now let me rest in peace"
rest wont come
and all my pain
to you are hidden.
You do not see me.
What color are my tearstains?
My pain
is all invisible.
Nothing to see.
© Sarah C., Norwalk, CT
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This article has 26 comments.
RoryP, said...
on Dec. 19 2009 at 6:39 am
Very beautiful work, I loved it. Keep on doing what you're doing. =)
calephchad BRONZE said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 3:04 pm
This one's my favourite out of all of them! Whoo! Hahahaha.
astrostar2 DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 10 2009 at 3:54 pm
I was moved very deeply by this poem's diction and metaphors. I also love how "less is more" in this poem-- so many emotions are expressed in this concise work. Great job!
foreverdreaming14 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 4 2009 at 11:29 pm
I loved it. It is very short and powerful, you are a great writer so keep doing what you are doing.
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 2 2009 at 9:58 am
Hayz is right.
Good: Feeling & flow.
Good: Feeling & flow.
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER said...
on Nov. 1 2009 at 9:05 pm
I absolutly love this poem i love the emotion that is poured into it...are u a deep writer and are u into deep poems if soo pls check out mind and let me know wat u think...Nobody has yet :( but anyway love the poem its really good
