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The New Me

September 30, 2009
By gothgirl13 GOLD, Red Hook, New York
gothgirl13 GOLD, Red Hook, New York
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You helped me realize who I was.
The heartbreak helped me see who you really were.
The pain opened my eyes to a whole new world.
The suffering rid me of the happiness I had before.
What you did to me left me free of love and joy.
You destroyed my ability to feel any emotion.
You ruined my life.
But smehow I still love you.



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on Dec. 22 2009 at 4:31 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

I totally relate. and this is wonderful. keep it up!! :)

on Nov. 25 2009 at 2:26 pm
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
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Really powerful and I love it. I can relate to this piece and I'm sure others can too.

Keep writing =•]

on Oct. 16 2009 at 1:51 pm
gothgirl13 GOLD, Red Hook, New York
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thank u. it really means a lot 2 me that people like my poetry

on Oct. 16 2009 at 12:36 pm
i can really relate to this. it describes things that have happened to me in the past year. it's really good. :)

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on Oct. 16 2009 at 12:26 pm
wow really deep. I love it. i can kinda relate to it