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The New Me

You helped me realize who I was.
The heartbreak helped me see who you really were.
The pain opened my eyes to a whole new world.
The suffering rid me of the happiness I had before.
What you did to me left me free of love and joy.
You destroyed my ability to feel any emotion.
You ruined my life.
But smehow I still love you.



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~*HopelesslyCrushed*~ said...
Dec. 22, 2009 at 4:31 pm:
I totally relate. and this is wonderful. keep it up!! :)
 
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chu-chi,!!! said...
Nov. 25, 2009 at 2:26 pm:
Really powerful and I love it. I can relate to this piece and I'm sure others can too.
Keep writing =•]
 
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randomperson_003 said...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 12:36 pm:
i can really relate to this. it describes things that have happened to me in the past year. it's really good. :)
 
gothgirl13 replied...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 1:51 pm :
thank u. it really means a lot 2 me that people like my poetry
 
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at004 said...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 12:26 pm:
wow really deep. I love it. i can kinda relate to it
 
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