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Whisper in my ear

Beat in my heart
~ like summer thunder
~ like pouring rain
Rush through my veins
~ like water in a river
~ like wind through the grass
Tangle in my hair
~ like the harsh winter wind
~ like a dream that gives me hope
Slip through my fingers
~ like the hours in a day
~ like the passing of a friend
Dance before my eyes
~ like lightening in the sky
~ like waves on the water

Whisper in my ear....





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thisbandgeek said...
Oct. 25, 2009 at 11:04 am
this is great! the sensory language really helps me SEE what you are writing about. awesome work!
 
greg9381 said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 1:37 pm
i love it!!
 
lifeisabeautifullie said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 9:07 am
this is great Amelia!!
 
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