October 7, 2009
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There's been a total eclipse,
on this girl,
ever since you came into her world.
She hasn't seen the sun,
for so long she didnt even know,
anything was wrong.
She only wanted to be his,
to know if he liked her,
one little bit.
She knows she shouldnt like him,
and that its wrong,
but she always thinks of him,
whenever she hears a love sing.
She can't help but look in his eyes
and still dream of his lips,
because on her heart,
he has placed an eclipse.

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biter_sweet said...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 2:57 pm
Romance is one of the many inspirations for writing. Never hold back your emotion. Coming from one writer to another I know how much of vent writing can be. Good job. Take your pain and use it. Good job.
Poetic_Mind replied...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 6:07 pm
Thank you.
ninian said...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 10:26 am
this is really beautiful i hope it works out for you two
Poetic_Mind replied...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 1:59 pm
yeah it didnt work out but thank you for the comment. and im glad i got a good poem out of it. :)
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