why can’t this be?

October 6, 2009
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why can’t this be?
why (do you lie to your preaches;?//
of glory an—d(ying) wisdom?
to never fight, THink,
dammed think
your propheti-
c lies
are getting useless
so stop lov—ing,
hypocritic,al words
and stop swearing,
just sen—s)or it all up!
and (stop lying
and stop trying
and just stop,


(i will,)

so why can’t we be?
why can’t this be?

my master of,,,


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Senga123 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 5:35 pm
I'm confused........
Sumana2 replied...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 2:54 pm
yeah so am i.
from your school yo said...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 8:58 pm
amazing poem!!! is it gonna be in TLAA this year?
twichy22 replied...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 8:59 pm
oh... i'm not sure!
HadarSing96 said...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 8:52 pm
this is...amazing.
the whole concept, the way you used symbols, and space lines, and all of that. it's just amazing.
you are my idol(:
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