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why can’t this be?

October 6, 2009
By twichy22 BRONZE, Tenafly, New Jersey
twichy22 BRONZE, Tenafly, New Jersey
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why can’t this be?
why (do you lie to your preaches;?//
of glory an—d(ying) wisdom?
to never fight, THink,
dammed think
your propheti-
c lies
are getting useless
so stop lov—ing,
hypocritic,al words
and stop swearing,
just sen—s)or it all up!
(****!)
and (stop lying
and stop trying
;
and just stop,


)((



(i will,)

so why can’t we be?
why can’t this be?

my master of,,,





nothing//.

The author's comments:
A poem I wrote last year to describe my confused anger towards an old friend.

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on Jul. 2 2010 at 2:54 pm
Meavescrete SILVER, Potomac, Maryland
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yeah so am i.

on Mar. 21 2010 at 5:35 pm
Chaness1000 SILVER, Tenafly, New Jersey
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I'm confused........

on Oct. 16 2009 at 8:59 pm
twichy22 BRONZE, Tenafly, New Jersey
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oh... i'm not sure!

on Oct. 16 2009 at 8:58 pm
amazing poem!!! is it gonna be in TLAA this year?

HadarSing96 said...
on Oct. 16 2009 at 8:52 pm
this is...amazing.

the whole concept, the way you used symbols, and space lines, and all of that. it's just amazing.

you are my idol(: