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why can’t this be?
why (do you lie to your preaches;?//
of glory an—d(ying) wisdom?
to never fight, THink,
dammed think
your propheti-
c lies
are getting useless
so stop lov—ing,
hypocritic,al words
and stop swearing,
just sen—s)or it all up!
(****!)
and (stop lying
and stop trying
;
and just stop,


)((



(i will,)

so why can’t we be?
why can’t this be?

my master of,,,





nothing//.





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Senga123 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 5:35 pm
I'm confused........
 
Sumana2 replied...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 2:54 pm
yeah so am i.
 
from your school yo said...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 8:58 pm
amazing poem!!! is it gonna be in TLAA this year?
 
twichy22 replied...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 8:59 pm
oh... i'm not sure!
 
HadarSing96 said...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 8:52 pm
this is...amazing.
the whole concept, the way you used symbols, and space lines, and all of that. it's just amazing.
you are my idol(:
 
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