October 6, 2009
sorrounded by people and never hear a word.
it feels like there's only you and a world with no one that cares or loves you.
you feel like your invisible.
it's kind of sad but do you think anyone cares
your just a person that standing in the middle of your life screaming out for someone to hear you.
but even if you scream the loudest you can.
no one is gonna hear you so just give up.
thats the best advice i can give you.

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In_Love_Loved said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 5:10 pm
This really gets me... I can feel the emotion and I think you do have raw talent. Aw you seem so hard on yourself!
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. said...
Dec. 23, 2009 at 4:22 pm
I like the structure and ideas here. Great poem. I think if you could use more similies or like whatever those things are called where you compare stuff to like other things lol wow that sounds stupid but I thik you get my point, yes? Haha but great poem I have totally been there I think you have a lot of emotion to fuel great poetry, keep it up!
FaithSnyder16 replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 5:18 pm
I totally am going through this right now, no joke. Things are happening around me, and I keep telling people, but they don't care... I'm so glad you wrote this so now I know that I am not alone...
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