Freeless

October 6, 2009
By Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"


Free me from this nightmare.
& all this pain that I must bare.
What must i sacrifice?
What is happyness's price?
Stuck in a world where no one cares.
Everywhere I look hateful glares.
Is there not an end to this constant pain.
Its enough to drive someone insane.
I wish I could tare down my wall.
& have someone to catch me when I fall.
I am alone in this wreched place.
Because there is evil behind every face!
The fear of never being set free.
Constintly haunts me.
How long will I be able to take this?
Each day i sink further into the abyss.



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on May. 9 2010 at 4:38 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you have a very nice way of poetically stating your trecherous sad depressing lonesome downfall that casts you into the pit of lost souls for eternity. (wink,wink)

on Dec. 28 2009 at 2:45 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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theres always downfalls in life, but there is always hope to come out of it.

very emotional poem, it touched me.

on Nov. 3 2009 at 3:07 pm
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"

Thank you soo much for ur comment it really made me feel good about my poetry cause i havent had many people comment on my poems infact i think u r the first again thanks soo much it means alot to me that u liked it :)

on Nov. 3 2009 at 3:05 pm
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"

Well i respect ur belifes but i dont believe in god or satan soo yeah he doesnt help me sorry but thanks for the comment i hoped u liked the poem

on Nov. 3 2009 at 2:23 pm
yeah this world is full of hatred, but it gives me hope to think about what kind of god we have which is a loving caring god, and many people think that god rules the world but its actually satan. But anyway thank you for commenting on my poem I love yours a lot to.

on Nov. 2 2009 at 2:55 pm
whiterosebeauty GOLD, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
\"If you prick us do we not bleed? If you tickle us do we not laugh? If you poison us do we not die? And if you wrong us shall we not revenge?\"
or
\"Some books are ment to be tasted, others to be swallowed, and some few to be chewed and digested\"

I really like this. I have felt this way many times but I didn't express it nearly as well as you did. Definitely keep writing =)


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