I need you

October 5, 2009
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I'm so cold that I'm shaking, you are the only thing on my mind, I've got to hold on until the end, I'm tough but not as tough as you, I'm shaking more and more now it's so cold, I know that I can't go now it's not my time, no chimes ringing, I'm still here barely, I can see your face now as I sqeeze my hands into fists, I'm not going to quit on you or myself, my heart is barely beating, my body temp is way down, I need some warmth, I need you!

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Inkspired said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 3:01 pm
Again, this is a really good idea, I just think it could be so much better if you improved your flow, that kind of thing. Great job!
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Oct. 16, 2009 at 2:14 pm
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