October 5, 2009
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Hands, clasped.

Then thrown around his neck, already receding.
Hands waving

Hands shaking.
Hands brushing away a tear,


Hands, fading.

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kiska_puppy11 said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 9:23 pm
It is sooo cool how just a few words, when put together to flow well, say so much! I agree this poem is really powerful. Keep writing. :)
sunshine91210 said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 7:49 pm
This was a really powerful poem and I enjoyed reading it.
Inkspired said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:39 pm
I love how you never stated the meaning, but you know what it is when you read it. Really, really powerful.
Bonnie S. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 4:18 pm
i loved reading this. it's so simple but the words are so powerful. the meaning can be broad, but it is obvious and the picture you selected help show what meaning is
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