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In the palm of my heart,
I hold you here.

Please kiss my fingertips, dear,

With your dewy skin, lit from within.

Rhumba-step, rhumba-step,
My original sin.

In the palm of my heart,
I'll keep you here.



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ninian said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 3:13 pm:
love the rhyming!!
 
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Veritytrue said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 9:18 pm:
Beautiful and sweet!
 
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Inkspired said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:37 pm:
This is beautiful! I love it! Can you read some of my work? I'd love to know what you think of it!
 
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TigerLynn said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 3:36 pm:
I like this a lot ! Will your read my work?
 
Avalynn replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 3:48 pm :
Wow, i love this poem. it really spoke to me; its sweet and light but means a lot. thank you for posting this!
 
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