October 5, 2009
By musiclove24 SILVER, Deerfield, Massachusetts
musiclove24 SILVER, Deerfield, Massachusetts
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just hide behind the tears of a clown"


Your core hurts. Your soul is doubled over in pain.

Your stomach drops every 60 seconds.

Your ears ring with the silence around you.

No matter where you turn you only see black.
Every memory you have is washed away.

Everyone that loves you turns to skeletons.

The world as you know it is no more.

Everyone in your life is nothing but a thought.

You’ve felt lonely before,

but this feeling is so much more.

You can’t think straight, hell you can’t think at all.

No emotions, no feeling. Just black, dull.

Never thought I would reach this point.

Where I feel I have nowhere to turn.

No one to talk to.
No fuel to burn.

Nothing to look forward to.

No dreams to come true.

No hope in anything.

My mind is blank, my heart is askew.

Never thought I would reach this point while I’m with you.

Alone is much more than a word, more than a feeling.

Its hopelessness, restlessness, and knowing that there’s no one caring

The author's comments:
we hadnt talked in days and my spoul felt like it was eating itself

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on Oct. 16 2009 at 1:48 am
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.

Dang, i can connect i know how you feel, this is so deep.

lamaczt said...
on Oct. 15 2009 at 3:16 pm
I thought this poem had some very bold moment's like when it state's "Everyone that loves you turns to skeletons." That states the fact that every one that loved him are now gone. I belive if i was to rate this out of five i would give it a four and a half because of the use of inspiring word.

on Oct. 14 2009 at 2:25 pm
lmp416 PLATINUM, Brockton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes people write the things that they can't say." -One Tree Hill

this is amazing! i love it :) stay up & keep writing!

on Oct. 14 2009 at 11:23 am
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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i totally agree, im going thru something a little like this its gettin to were i just want to cry and give up but i love him to much to let go!!

on Oct. 14 2009 at 7:05 am
Mystery_Girl SILVER, Lake, Michigan
8 articles 6 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love me or Hate me"......"Me Vs. The World and the World is Winning"......"When the going gets tough the tough get going".

This is very good.

JordanLacey said...
on Oct. 13 2009 at 12:37 pm
I felt similar to this when my ex and I broke up. But it got better, I no longer feel like I have a hole in my chest.

on Oct. 12 2009 at 9:43 pm
RhyanWoods SILVER, Glendale, Nebraska
9 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
there's always two people in every picture: The photographer and the viewer.

Amazing! Keep writing, this helped me, im going through something like this right now.

on Oct. 12 2009 at 4:09 pm
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
11 articles 0 photos 133 comments
I love this poem. I can understand how you're feeling. please keep writing!

razka13 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 12:26 pm
razka13 BRONZE, Guildford, Other
2 articles 1 photo 2 comments
I really liked this, it was very emotive and well written. I especially liked the last three lines.

JessM SILVER said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 1:42 am
JessM SILVER, Wasilla, Alaska
6 articles 3 photos 1 comment
ahh this was great! Simple, btu great. My favorite lines were "No one to talk to. No fuel to burn." I don't know why but they were cool/


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