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Your core hurts. Your soul is doubled over in pain.





Your stomach drops every 60 seconds.




Your ears ring with the silence around you.





No matter where you turn you only see black.
Every memory you have is washed away.



















Everyone that loves you turns to skeletons.




The world as you know it is no more.





Everyone in your life is nothing but a thought.

You’ve felt lonely before,




but this feeling is so much more.





You can’t think straight, hell you can’t think at all.





No emotions, no feeling. Just black, dull.

Never thought I would reach this point.




Where I feel I have nowhere to turn.





No one to talk to.
No fuel to burn.





Nothing to look forward to.





No dreams to come true.





No hope in anything.




My mind is blank, my heart is askew.


















Never thought I would reach this point while I’m with you.

Alone is much more than a word, more than a feeling.




Its hopelessness, restlessness, and knowing that there’s no one caring





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Stephaniere This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 1:48 am
Dang, i can connect i know how you feel, this is so deep.
 
lamaczt said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 3:16 pm
I thought this poem had some very bold moment's like when it state's "Everyone that loves you turns to skeletons." That states the fact that every one that loved him are now gone. I belive if i was to rate this out of five i would give it a four and a half because of the use of inspiring word.
 
lalax3 said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 2:25 pm
this is amazing! i love it :) stay up & keep writing!
 
heaven said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 11:23 am
i totally agree, im going thru something a little like this its gettin to were i just want to cry and give up but i love him to much to let go!!
 
Mystery_Girl said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 7:05 am
This is very good.
 
JordanLacey said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 12:37 pm
I felt similar to this when my ex and I broke up. But it got better, I no longer feel like I have a hole in my chest.
 
RhyanWoods said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 9:43 pm
Amazing! Keep writing, this helped me, im going through something like this right now.
 
blackamethyst said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 4:09 pm
I love this poem. I can understand how you're feeling. please keep writing!
 
razka13 said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 12:26 pm
I really liked this, it was very emotive and well written. I especially liked the last three lines.
 
JessM said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 1:42 am
ahh this was great! Simple, btu great. My favorite lines were "No one to talk to. No fuel to burn." I don't know why but they were cool/
 
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