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October 4, 2009
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Run. faster. no end. never an end. just go.
Run. sprint. halfway? just begun?
Run. pain. hurt.
Run. faster. push. don’t stop. never stop. numb. mechanical.
Run. harder. hurry. pathetic. weak.
Run. nothing more. never more.
Run. faster . be strong. don’t die. it’s only release. only losers need release.
Run. win. faster. blurred world.
Run. push. faster. harder.
Run. mind gone. losing control.
Run. too fast! brakes? winners don’t need brakes.
Help. the end.





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Stephaniere This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 20, 2009 at 1:56 am
Very good, I like the periods between each though.
 
petroskyc said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 6:54 pm
I liked this poem a lot. It gave you many different perspectives on why the speaker is running. The lines," Run. faster. dont't stop. never stop. numb. mechanical.," and "Run. harder. hurry. pathetic. weak," gives you the imagery that the speaker is running from someone or being chased, not intended on being caught. In contrast, the line," Run. too fast! brakes? winners don't need brakes.," makes you think that the speaker is in a race and is getting tired... (more »)
 
TigerLynn said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 10:03 pm
Interesting.
 
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