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The words,
were a deadening force
They shot through his blood, to his heart.
Bullets,
so quickly,
the words shattered it all.
Hot tears trickled, touching his cheeks,
dampening his parted lips.
He wiped the tears,
the vulnerability,
from his face.
His lips closed
his eyes darkened.
Stubborn.
he swore to himself,
that he would never allow it to happen again.
never let anyone
rip his heart from his chest,
tear it to shreds
so easily
like a child tearing up an old drawing they no longer cared for.
Never would he allow himself
to be broken,
to be crushed,
to be knocked across the face with words like the ones
She had spoken.




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SweetRoses said...
Feb. 7, 2010 at 3:45 pm:
Beautiful piece :), I really like it. It's so true about how people feel...you really wrote this well. I wish I could write pieces that well xD
 
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Aro_To_The_Heart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 9:32 am:
....amazing....(left speechless)
 
TigerLynn replied...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 3:57 pm :
Thank you so much!
 
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sunshine.dez. said...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 11:40 am:
this ones amazing too;
all of your work is actually.
:]
 
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KiraKira said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 9:52 am:
This is beautiful. Way to go!
 
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BunniComixArtist said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 9:38 pm:
i liked this sooo much!! You should totally continue writting...i want more!
 
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ninian said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 3:17 pm:
i love this its so awsome please write more!!!
 
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alley_rae said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 9:15 pm:
this is really good i just got broke up with and this is just how i am feeling i love it .... VERY GOOD WORK
 
TigerLynn replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 9:56 pm :
Thank you very much! i just put some stuff on teen ink and your the first person to comment on any of them! THNX! i wrote this when me and my boyfriend were borderline breaking up
 
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TigerLynn said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 3:25 pm:
Please comment and rate! thank you!
 
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