My name.

October 4, 2009
By StartlingThing GOLD, Gresham, Oregon
StartlingThing GOLD, Gresham, Oregon
13 articles 11 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The difference between the right word and the right word is like the difference between lightening bug and lightening" -Mark Twain

My name means nothing to some people who see it scrawld across a bleached out page.

My name is diffrent to forgien tounges that have sweet lisps among thier rose lips.

My name is like the sound of a gutair being tuned up with the sea of brass insturments.

My name came from the lands of Sweden with the feilds of wild flowers that sparkle with colors. Vivid from the blue contrast of the sky.

But because my name is mine, no one can compair with it.

My name is strange and does not rhyme with anything. It sticks out like a neon pink sign in the black from the monster's mouth.

My name is mine and not your's to judge. But lets not remorse over the loss of power, because you my friend will never hear my name wispered on those lips of revenge.

My name is sealed behind the walls of my mind that can not break out of thier cells.

Because my name is mine and no one can change that.

The author's comments:
In my laguage arts class we had a subject we had to write about. We took the steps to write a full poem about our names. When he talked about it he was also talking about a disease that had confused some peoples senses. I think he said something along the lines of "there is only like 100 people in the world who have this condition" And my mind started racing. And when I wrote the poem I tried my best to put the five senses into it.

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on Mar. 4 2010 at 7:08 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Wow, I really like this :) Just a couple grammar fixes and perfect!


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