October 1, 2009
pain can be phisical,emotional,or internal....but the pain you put me through was the worst.....all i did was love you try to make you feel wanted......but you turned me into the bitter one....the one that doesnt want to keep living.....drownding in this pain..i try to move on but i am not sure if this pain will ever go away.......

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xXBrokenxNightmareXx said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 7:43 am
I know there is ALOT of typos in my poems but that was due to the fact that I didnt really have time and I typed them in a rush so there are some mess ups....Sooo im sorry D:
WritingLoverForever said...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 7:34 pm
Once again, your writing has spoken to me. I love all of your poetry. Your writing style has a darker, Evanescence-type flavor to it, and I LOVE that. I love dark, sad poems like yours, and until now I haven't found anyone on TeenInk who has your writing style. You rock! Keep writing! :)
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