Pain?

October 1, 2009
By SuicidalDreamer.. PLATINUM, Marshall, Illinois
SuicidalDreamer.. PLATINUM, Marshall, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Drop The World....." Or "Everything Happens For A Reason....." Or "I am jealous of every woman that has ever hugged him, Cause for that mere second. They held my entire world."


pain can be phisical,emotional,or internal....but the pain you put me through was the worst.....all i did was love you try to make you feel wanted......but you turned me into the bitter one....the one that doesnt want to keep living.....drownding in this pain..i try to move on but i am not sure if this pain will ever go away.......

The author's comments:
its about the types of pain and how they can affect you and everything

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on Sep. 24 2010 at 7:43 am
SuicidalDreamer.. PLATINUM, Marshall, Illinois
31 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Drop The World....." Or "Everything Happens For A Reason....." Or "I am jealous of every woman that has ever hugged him, Cause for that mere second. They held my entire world."

I know there is ALOT of typos in my poems but that was due to the fact that I didnt really have time and I typed them in a rush so there are some mess ups....Sooo im sorry D:

on Aug. 27 2010 at 7:34 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Once again, your writing has spoken to me. I love all of your poetry. Your writing style has a darker, Evanescence-type flavor to it, and I LOVE that. I love dark, sad poems like yours, and until now I haven't found anyone on TeenInk who has your writing style. You rock! Keep writing! :)


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