Big Cities

I love Big Cities.
Mosaic of cultures and faces
But the best part is
no one knows your name…
You are only a piece in the picture and yet
you go unnoticed.
While other seek to be original
I seek to be myself
out of the spot light.
It is much easier to find yourself
when you know you are actually lost.





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Anonabelle said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 8:03 pm
Not bad, a few grammar and spelling errors but not bad. Pretty.
 
artsygale replied...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 9:31 pm
Thank you.
Yeah, I noticed a few of the grammar errors after I put it up. I'll be sure to let someone else look over my next one before I put it up. ^__^ Spelling is not my strong suit.
 
flatrock85 said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:45 am
this is a beautiful poem. I love it!
 
artsygale replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 10:52 am
Thank you. ^__^ I'm really glad that people seem to like it.
 
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