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October 8, 2009
By bballbabe3 BRONZE, Lincoln, Maine
bballbabe3 BRONZE, Lincoln, Maine
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Water trickles over your pebbling,
Down into the black lines of the valley.
Your color, as perfect as fire
Burning down the forest.
Flying at hurricane speed
Toward the round basket.
Making a perfect rainbow
After raining all day.
Laying right into that hoop
Like the first snowfall of the season.



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on Oct. 9 2009 at 11:40 am
cross.fire BRONZE, Monroe, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is the fire and hope is what burns."

Very nice poem. It feels like it's delicate and gentle like a gracious stream. Beautiful.