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I hate the way you look at me
I hate the way you dress

I hate the way your hair looks
I hate it when you say my name
I hate it when you play your silly game

I hadn't had a chance to say, the way I really feel
I hated the way you broke my heart.....



But I mostly hated that you did it through a text




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XXHELLBOYZXX said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 1:59 pm:
WONDERFUL POEM. KEEP THEM COMING
 
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45 is raw said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 1:59 pm:
i like it sound like someone was all and there feels
 
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terez said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 2:06 pm:
yea what j-rod said
 
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DELLA DELLA Anderson said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 1:58 pm:
thats was so tight
 
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Chihuahua said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 1:58 pm:
you right... i hate people that end a relationship by text...
 
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NEFARIOUS said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 1:57 pm:
COWARD! Who would hurt someone through a text. This is DEEP. Its amazing!
 
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itzel said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 1:57 pm:
its a great poem, but its not the best. it would of been better if you would of put more feelings and emotions in it.
 
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Nisha_92 said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 1:57 pm:
I liked it is was cool
 
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erickramos913 said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 1:57 pm:
Holy gravioly, that's good/harsh
 
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SNOOP said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 1:55 pm:
Wow snap! snap! snap! snap!
 
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heaven said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 12:42 pm:
ya it would of been better if you putyour mind in it and done it yourself!!
thats what people mean when you have a hand of a writer but i heard this before!!
 
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ChelseyLynn said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 6:59 pm:
Im pretty sure this was on a movie.
If your going to write it should be your own not just something youve heard. Really wow
 
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Ironsider said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 2:58 pm:
How original... not. I'd really like to see something on here that hasn't been written a hundred times by every teen in the country. What happened to beauty in poetry?
 
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LostinthisWorld.67 said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 2:54 pm:
This was really good until the last sentence
 
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musicgirl757 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 1:19 pm:
This is so amazing and powerful. BEAUTIFUL!
 
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blouin said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 12:18 pm:
i understand wat your going threw i just went threw the same thing like 3 days ago thank you this poem helps me get threw the pain
 
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Mizotron said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 9:03 pm:
It was amazin! Keep writing and ill keep readin!
 
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yummy french toast said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 3:37 pm:
This was ok untill u said, but i mostly hate that u did it through a text. It makes it sound like a juvenial relationship
 
cheerchick90210 replied...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 5:15 pm :
That was an awesome poem!! I love the ending.
 
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shakedra<3 said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 3:02 pm:
that was the best poem i think i have ever heard...i was wonderful
 
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