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I hate the way you look at me
I hate the way you dress

I hate the way your hair looks
I hate it when you say my name
I hate it when you play your silly game

I hadn't had a chance to say, the way I really feel
I hated the way you broke my heart.....



But I mostly hated that you did it through a text



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swcricket98 said...
Jun. 26, 2011 at 12:35 am:

Honestly, I don't really agree with the other comments :/ I feel as if it's too choppy. I understand that it's free verse, and you were pouring your heart into it, but it's sorta typical.

5/10

 
dia.dreamer replied...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 11:23 am :
I kinda feel that way too. firstly, it's kinda obvious, not completely original. and secondly, the lines don't somehow sound right together - it's choppy, yes. it sounds like you just wrote it in a hurry, but you did feel it when you wrote it.
 
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Stpaulian said...
May 22, 2011 at 6:14 pm:
I like they way you ended it. Its contagous and you mad at any guy who would be such a coward. 
 
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blackbutterfly said...
Dec. 15, 2010 at 4:39 pm:
niiice. totally luv the fire feeling in that wickd poem! lol yes itt sux when guys do that 2 ya. but ya gotta grit ur teeth n make em feel bad when they see you can handle on ur own. haha cuz frm experience itt works. lmao!
 
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Jordyn:) said...
Dec. 27, 2009 at 10:57 pm:
So real, because so many girls can relate to that type of coward who has done that to them.
 
forgottenangel replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 11:20 am :
I love this poem so much. you never know how it feels unless you've experienced it yourself.
 
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Brooke M. said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 5:16 pm:
hi! that was a really good poem
very good imagery
nice emotion keep it up!
 
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Byron said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 2:28 pm:
wow this is sooo live i hate that
 
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Wildheart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 10:44 am:
wow, so concise byt simple. i loved it and i know how you feel, if this really did happen, keep up the good work, great job!
 
SilverAngel replied...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 11:48 am :
I Love the entire poem, but the ending is by far the best part!
 
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aRunningTourist This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 1:37 am:
OMG! that was amazing. i absolutely love it when someone pours out their heart like that. i can totally relate to that. and im sorry that it happened. but with that negative came out two positives. a better eye for the future and an amazing poem. Good job.
 
choirchic said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 11:23 pm:
that was amazing. the emotion in it is really good. it relates so well to teenage girls that have had a boyfriend break up with them through text. it was really good. keep up the good work
 
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blingblang4eva said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 6:08 pm:
a good breakup emotion.a good way to recover from a breakup is poetry. so very good idea.
 
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Mylifeforpoetry said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 5:33 pm:
I like your poem, that's all i have to say
 
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Ali.B said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 7:10 am:
i like this. it sound like you need to kick somebodies but. keep writing.
 
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isaac said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 2:07 pm:
i feel your pain
 
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me123 said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 2:05 pm:
woooooooooooow snap
 
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Juan Miguel said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 2:01 pm:
8 out of 10
 
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the ripper said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 1:59 pm:
that is deep it really came from your heart
Like it i am glad someone speaks the truth its good to say what you need to say and not hold it in
 
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