Holding On

September 28, 2009
By Kristi Desatnick GOLD, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
Kristi Desatnick GOLD, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
10 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Walking up and down the street, just like we used to, holding hands, holding conversations, holding each other in our hearts.
Now I walk that same street alone, holding nothing, holding emptiness, holding memories in my heart.
Memories of how we used to be, back when we were in love, holding everything together, never standing alone.
Then things changed, but we tried to fight it, holding on to something that was already too far gone to save.
So now I walk that same street alone, holding on to the knowledge that we can never get that back, holding on to the love thats not worth holding on to anymore.



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on Oct. 11 2009 at 10:46 am
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

that was amazing, and i know how this feels. sometimes you just have to move on and remember, anyone who hurts someones heart isnt worth remembering, trust me, i know

on Oct. 10 2009 at 2:59 pm
LoveBam14 BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
If you stand for nothing, you'll fall for anything.

SO Inspiring<33

on Oct. 9 2009 at 1:15 pm
luigis_love BRONZE, Omaha, Nebraska
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments
this is a very beautiful piece i love how simple and calm it is and flows well too! keep writing your great at it!

INnaturegirl said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 4:32 pm
omg... this is a beautiful poem!!!!!!! it describes exactly how i feel right now about this guy... your poem really helped me put my feelings into prospective. thank you for this piece!!!!!

on Oct. 8 2009 at 5:25 am
Sunset17 SILVER, New City, New York
7 articles 0 photos 22 comments
That was a really great poem... very true and you put a lot of feeling into those words.

freewriter22 said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 1:55 pm
Your poem is beautiful, honest and true. Keep writing, inspire others!


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