Hurt Me

September 28, 2009
If you could see,
What you do to me
you'd understand why I cry these tears,
and shake terribly from all my fears.

I don't want to loose you
But, you make it to where I have to go
so far from this place
so I can't see your face
with your fake little smile
I'll be gone for quite a while.

You said you loved me.
Why did you lie?
Was it that hard?
You said we'd be together,

Baby, I f***ing love you
but your just the same.
You play this like it's a game
I'm real
I have feelings
and a heart
that you stole from the start
and now we have to be miles apart.

I won't blame it on myself
I won't let it tear me to pieces.
Yes, I'll cry
Yes I'll beg, pray, and plead to die.
But, I'll always be thinking of you
and this you already know
So, from here on
I'll let you go.

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GothPromKing said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 10:10 pm
I agree with everyone else who wrote "strong and emotionfil". That is the way I see it. Good job, and I thank you for the nice comments you left me.
LostinthisWorld.67 replied...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 7:42 pm
Your welcome hun :)
i like our stuff alot
LostinthisWorld.67 said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 3:38 pm
Thanks hun :)
taylorrr said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 9:08 pm
i loveee it...i totally understand how you got the inspiration
blingblang4eva said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 6:13 pm
amazing poem :) very weell written. lots of emotion. liek the rhyming scheme.
rengeki said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 1:11 pm
yea i understand completely i just went through it, but anyways it nice
LostinthisWorld.67 replied...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 10:23 pm
thank u :)
P.Reese said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 9:01 pm
Very strong poetry.. I feel where ur coming from. Ur words formed a train straight to my heart. Inspiring...
LostinthisWorld.67 replied...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 10:22 pm
Aw thanks hun
Mizotron said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 8:55 pm
Omg that was sooo good :) keep going ur doin great
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