Piercing Silence

September 27, 2009
Alone in the quiet stillness
Waiting for the smallest sound
Singing to fill the ringing
Of the silence that presses in on me from every direction
Threatening to suffocate
No one to witness
But the face in the mirror
Eyes closed, I become the quiet
One with the shadows in the hall
That leap and quiver in my moments of restlessness
I am nothing
But the silence piercing the empty night
Close your eyes and listen





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zoeeverett said...
Dec. 13, 2013 at 1:22 am
I haven't been on this site in a long time, saw your comments on my work and I got chills. This is such a timeless piece. line 3 is my favorite
 
TigerLynn said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 3:57 pm
MY favorite part is the part about leaping and quivering, very nice
 
Veritytrue replied...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 5:08 pm
Thanks for commenting!
 
LRachel said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 4:29 pm
Thank you for commenting on my poem....Yours is amazing! I love it. I really love it.
 
Veritytrue replied...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 11:16 pm
Thanks so much! Your poem was amazing too! Thanks for taking the time to comment!
 
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