Innocence

September 25, 2009
By ajibike PLATINUM, Monroe, Louisiana
ajibike PLATINUM, Monroe, Louisiana
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You took something away
from me that I can’t
ever get back. You stole
away my pure spirit, and
I hate you for what I lack.
You pried away from my
gripping hands a gift
you didn’t deserve. My
clarity, my pride, my all
mean nothing without my
innocence.



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on Jan. 25 2010 at 6:53 am
ajibike PLATINUM, Monroe, Louisiana
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Thank you. I really appreciate it.

dule05 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 3:09 am
dule05 BRONZE, Kraljevo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"In the end, the only people who fail are those who do not try." ~David Viscott

This is really amazing and inspiring, I love your imagery and I wouldn't add anything!

Keep writing!

on Jan. 8 2010 at 4:26 pm
ajibike PLATINUM, Monroe, Louisiana
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Constructive criticism would be awesome.


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