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My Favorite Stranger

September 23, 2009
By smb312 BRONZE, New City, New York
smb312 BRONZE, New City, New York
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She told me not to give her secret away
I do not know if I can keep the promise I made with her
If I break the promise she will feel the emotion of betray
Our friendship would go from being really great to a big blur

I do not know if I can keep the promise I made with her
Our connection would go from bright blue to dark dull gray
Our friendship would go from being great to a blur
My heart would sink because she wouldn’t talk to me day after day

Our connection would go from bright blue to dark dull gray
I would feel upset looking at the friends that we once were
My heart would sink because she wouldn’t talk to me day after day
Now we are just two strangers, a woman and a sir

I would feel upset looking at the friends that we once were
If I break the promise she will feel the emotion of betray
I do not want to be strangers, like a customer and an entrepreneur
Now we are just two strangers, a woman and a sir

The author's comments:
About my Best Friend Cori!! Dedicated to Teddy Bauer (My Dog who is on the 18th hole)

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shamira said...
on Oct. 6 2009 at 7:07 pm
I like this peom because it is real thing in the magical world where to great friends tell each one secrets and one of them break the promise by not keeping and that's when their friendship comes to an end.

on Oct. 6 2009 at 8:30 am
I really liked this poem because a lot of people, mostly girls feel this way when a friend tells them something secret. I could really connect to this in several ways.

on Oct. 5 2009 at 9:05 pm
MeghanMichelle GOLD, Hooksett, New Hampshire
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Wondeful poem. Love the arrangement.

on Oct. 5 2009 at 7:22 pm
ashcan1993 BRONZE, Maplewood, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
:) Be happy

This is great!!!!

on Oct. 5 2009 at 12:48 pm
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

omg this is good real good


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