Going Crazy, Breaking Down, Falling Apart

September 14, 2009
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Fear follows me
Like a shadow that's there in sunlight and darkness
It hunts me down
And tracks me like prey

Undeserved pain that sneaks into my life

It's destroying me
And my life too
I'm going crazy
Breaking down
I'm falling apart

What do I do?

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Kindell Harris said...
Nov. 1, 2009 at 8:25 am
I liked this poem very much. Sometimes you struggle to find the exact poem that fits what your going through. And this one fits my life to a tee right now.
writer24/7/365 replied...
Nov. 1, 2009 at 8:40 am
thanks. yeah, life can be pretty terrible.
writer24/7/365 said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 6:52 pm
Thanks from both of you! if you knew what was going on in my life, trust me, you'd be going crazy too. Especially thanks to kayleighbean13 because you told me why you liked it. please read my other pieces and comment.
Sh0wers;) said...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 9:00 pm
I love this peom,,
webweaver96 replied...
Aug. 22, 2011 at 4:24 pm
Thanks! (I'm the same user, with a changed username.)
kayleighbean13 said...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 8:47 am
I really liked this poem. All though it was really short It made me think about a lot. It made me think about a lot about my life. It also had me asking a lot of questions, like what is going on in the writers life and much more.
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