My Forever Darkness

September 24, 2009
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I linger in a dreamscape
A world of diamonds hidden beyond the rough midst of fabricated light
As I wait in the darkness of the night
The whisper in the wind is my lullaby
The Moon and Sun dividing my heart into two
The only extremity holding me in the vague grasp I feel is you
And as nightmares of what will be
Flutter my mind with misery
I wait for you in my forever darkness haunting
I'll wait for you
For your absence is my taunting
How could I convince myself
Why did I want to believe
It is simple
But it is also too complicated to understand
All I wanted was to take your hand
For it is you that I have fallen under your captivating grasp
It is stupid really
A childish intention
I believe to be too much to ask
I walk the distance of life itself
For time takes it all away
I will be waiting in my forever darkness
Until you give me the light of day

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a-ron8499 said...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 8:29 pm
i wanted to say thank you because when i read this poem it inspired me to write about the feelings i have towards this one girl but i still do not how to word it
ASoulFullOfDreams This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 10, 2011 at 5:18 pm
It has been two years since you posted this comment and I am reading this for the first time. I apologize for never responding, that's why I am now. This comment means so much to me, and I am thirlled that I inspired you that is my main goal when I write. Did you ever figure out how to express your feelings toward the girl you like? 
Farrahann said...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 11:05 am
I really like this poem it is amazing it decribed how i have felt at times and it is so good I hope that you keep writeing you are very talanted
S. replied...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 2:35 pm
Thanks so much! That is so sweet.
Meghan said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 8:33 pm
You are a really talented writer. I really enjoyed this poem!
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