How He Is Changing

September 24, 2009
By silentlove DIAMOND, Perrysburg, Ohio
silentlove DIAMOND, Perrysburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
dance like nobodies watching, love like youve never been hurt, sing nobodies listning, live like its hevean on earth -mark twain
worry always about the distance and you'll never make the jump -alana marsh <3


he's changing:
no, he's changed
for the better?
I think not

he's changed:
for the worst
and now I don't know
who he is

he's forgetting:
no, forgotten
all the wonderful talks and times
we have had

he's forgotten:
about how much
I care about his pain
his world

don't forget
I care about you
don't forget
I'm here for you
don't forget
I haven't left you
even when everyone else has

please,
don't treat me like this
please,
don't speak to me like this
please,
don't tell me I don't know
when we both know I do

I forgive the way you're acting
cus' I know,
I've been there too
but please,
dont,
please,
dont,
please,
stop:
I'm here...
for you


The author's comments:
One of my friends has been acting differently latley. Treating everyone different than usual. I want to shake him and tell him to snap out of it! Cus I know thats not what he's like. Hope you like it, please rate and comment :)

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on Oct. 6 2009 at 7:20 pm
silentlove DIAMOND, Perrysburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
dance like nobodies watching, love like youve never been hurt, sing nobodies listning, live like its hevean on earth -mark twain
worry always about the distance and you'll never make the jump -alana marsh <3

thanks :). im crossin my fingers he will read this and get it...finally.

on Oct. 5 2009 at 9:43 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

i loed the eemotion behind the whole feel of the poem. its cool how you used a real life experiance to create the poem. i love the last few stanzas

on Oct. 5 2009 at 2:06 pm
silentlove DIAMOND, Perrysburg, Ohio
68 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
dance like nobodies watching, love like youve never been hurt, sing nobodies listning, live like its hevean on earth -mark twain
worry always about the distance and you'll never make the jump -alana marsh <3

:) thank you! everyone! please read and comment on some of my other stuff! i'd appreciate it!

Duckie430 said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 11:53 am
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

good emotion

on Oct. 4 2009 at 10:47 pm
Brokenlover GOLD, Albany, Oregon
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This hits home. I've got the same problem but he's so gosh darn pigheaded. You're a good writer.:)

on Oct. 4 2009 at 8:10 pm
xxMissingyouxx GOLD, Newfield, New Jersey
13 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is like a butterfly, hold it too close, it'll crush.. hold it too loose, it'll fly away"

i love your poem..i seriously get how your feling..your poem is awsome dont stop writin<3


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