How He Is Changing

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he's changing:
no, he's changed
for the better?
I think not

he's changed:
for the worst
and now I don't know
who he is

he's forgetting:
no, forgotten
all the wonderful talks and times
we have had

he's forgotten:
about how much
I care about his pain
his world

don't forget
I care about you
don't forget
I'm here for you
don't forget
I haven't left you
even when everyone else has

please,
don't treat me like this
please,
don't speak to me like this
please,
don't tell me I don't know
when we both know I do

I forgive the way you're acting
cus' I know,
I've been there too
but please,
dont,
please,
dont,
please,
stop:
I'm here...
for you





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choirchic said...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 9:43 pm
i loed the eemotion behind the whole feel of the poem. its cool how you used a real life experiance to create the poem. i love the last few stanzas
 
<3silentlove<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 7:20 pm
thanks :). im crossin my fingers he will read this and get it...finally.
 
Duckie430 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 11:53 am
good emotion
 
princess;not*at*all said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 10:47 pm
This hits home. I've got the same problem but he's so gosh darn pigheaded. You're a good writer.:)
 
xxMissingyouxx said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 8:10 pm
i love your poem..i seriously get how your feling..your poem is awsome dont stop writin<3
 
<3silentlove<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 2:06 pm
:) thank you! everyone! please read and comment on some of my other stuff! i'd appreciate it!
 
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